Reading Reviews for Summer at the Weaslies house
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Review #1, by Chloe Hi, Ho the roof fell in!

25th October 2006:
pps:Love the chapter title!

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Review #2, by Chloe Hi, Ho the roof fell in!

25th October 2006:
hmmmmm, it's good soph, put for god's sake, have a little more patience and EXPAND on the detail. I don't care if you get sick of it, you have to have more description in this fic! It's kinda funny, but it's so short and in such small quantity of writingit feels like you completely rushed it (which I happen to know you did). Why don't you focus the next chapter on the bacon sarnie incident? That was a hilarious read! Please update soon Sophie!

Ps: Big sisters get to be bossy so there. Haha. Your sitting next to me as I write this playing on the ps2.


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Review #3, by Rachel_N_Ron4ever Hi, Ho the roof fell in!

17th October 2006:
good job! hurry up and update please!

it was a little short but still great!


Author's Response: Tanku,Tanku. No really thanks so much 4 reviewing. Not many people do ya know what a mean. Soz if it was a bit short. I got really fed up with it and finished it on exactly 100 words. I've not bn able to log in 4 a while, but now I can I might write another chapter!

Thanks again

Juicy Lemon - OUT

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