It was a good chapter... but an incomplete story... it would really be a hit if you just added a few more chapters...

i must admit... you are a good writer...

7/10

Author's Response: yeah. i thought of doing that, but i couldn't think of anything, so i just left it, lol. i'm so lazy...

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is this a one-shot? it could be more

Author's Response: Oh thanks. I think i might leave it as a one shot though. Lately, for like the past few months I have had the WORST writers block ever. I've had some good story ideas though. lol.

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good!
carry on!

Author's Response: I might carry on, it depends....

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i like ie! a lot!



Author's Response: Thanks :) I might add a few more chapters to it, maybe...

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i know everybody always says "oh do write more!!" but this honestly seems like an introduction and not like a full story. it needed a little bit more closure than was given.

Author's Response: I'm going to try, but don't count on anything spectacular.

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OMG! u cant end it there! wat happened when she went back to his house, if she went coz she didnt actually answer! argh! i liked the story line and all but in my opinion it hasnt really finished. u could easily make this into a short story with like 3/4 chapters even. even if u just add one more chapter to say what happened. coz i really did like it, till i got to the end.

Author's Response: Well, you and another asked me to write more, so I'll try, but if I don't like what I write I won't add it... :D Thanks for the review.

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awe thats so sweet!!!

Author's Response: lol, thanks

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did'nt read the story 'cause there was a horrible banner!

Author's Response: Thanks...... :\

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That was really cute, the last line, I mean. I love that song too, they played it on Triple J HEAPS, didn't they? lol

Author's Response: I know! I'm sick of it now, lol.

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OHHHH man...........Where's the rest....... :( PLEASE!!!! LoL that was good SHORT but good.... MORE :D

Author's Response: Lol. Thanks, but that was a one-shot :D Sorry.. Maybe I'll write a follow up..

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No offence,I'm not trying to be mean,but that really had no point to it.

Author's Response: Um, exactly, it was just a one-shot.....

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Aw, it was sweet. ^^ Im going to have to look up this song now =P

Author's Response: It is an amazing song.... I've listened to it so much I'm almost sick of it :) Lol... not really. I think it would be impossible to get sick of...

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omg!!!!!!!!! this story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you reviewed... I like reviews....

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