It was a good chapter... but an incomplete story... it would really be a hit if you just added a few more chapters...
i must admit... you are a good writer...
7/10Author's Response: yeah. i thought of doing that, but i couldn't think of anything, so i just left it, lol. i'm so lazy... Report Review
is this a one-shot? it could be moreAuthor's Response: Oh thanks. I think i might leave it as a one shot though. Lately, for like the past few months I have had the WORST writers block ever. I've had some good story ideas though. lol. Report Review
carry on!Author's Response: I might carry on, it depends.... Report Review
i like ie! a lot!
Author's Response: Thanks :) I might add a few more chapters to it, maybe... Report Review
i know everybody always says "oh do write more!!" but this honestly seems like an introduction and not like a full story. it needed a little bit more closure than was given. Author's Response: I'm going to try, but don't count on anything spectacular. Report Review
OMG! u cant end it there! wat happened when she went back to his house, if she went coz she didnt actually answer! argh! i liked the story line and all but in my opinion it hasnt really finished. u could easily make this into a short story with like 3/4 chapters even. even if u just add one more chapter to say what happened. coz i really did like it, till i got to the end.Author's Response: Well, you and another asked me to write more, so I'll try, but if I don't like what I write I won't add it... :D Thanks for the review. Report Review
awe thats so sweet!!!Author's Response: lol, thanks Report Review
did'nt read the story 'cause there was a horrible banner!Author's Response: Thanks...... :\ Report Review
That was really cute, the last line, I mean. I love that song too, they played it on Triple J HEAPS, didn't they? lol Author's Response: I know! I'm sick of it now, lol. Report Review
OHHHH man...........Where's the rest....... :( PLEASE!!!! LoL that was good SHORT but good.... MORE :DAuthor's Response: Lol. Thanks, but that was a one-shot :D Sorry.. Maybe I'll write a follow up.. Report Review
No offence,I'm not trying to be mean,but that really had no point to it.Author's Response: Um, exactly, it was just a one-shot..... Report Review
Aw, it was sweet. ^^ Im going to have to look up this song now =PAuthor's Response: It is an amazing song.... I've listened to it so much I'm almost sick of it :) Lol... not really. I think it would be impossible to get sick of... Report Review
omg!!!!!!!!! this story is amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Author's Response: Thanks :) I'm glad you reviewed... I like reviews.... Report Review
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