{reviewid: 1747800, reviewer: 'RitaSkeeter'}
10th December 2007:
OH I LOVE ITits short but beatifull and meaningfull. I love it; and ill recommend it to my friends. Thank you for writing this
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{reviewid: 1593220, reviewer: 'LunerEclpz'}
23rd August 2007:
AHh! omg that is such a sad story there are tears in my eyes! Literaly tears! this was probubly the darkest of storys i have ever read. it is sooo moving all the same. Just as we have layers of skin ppl have layers of themselvs. Some ppl have it all exposed to every one and others you have to dig a little further. there are verry few ppl that can get through all the layers and see the really you and understand it. Hermione and Ron have something special and when there together there are no layers.
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{reviewid: 1593109, reviewer: 'LunerEclpz'}
23rd August 2007:
i really have to keep reading ... soo.. extra.. good. loved it. much... must ... read more!!
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{reviewid: 1368968, reviewer: 'MoonyIsMyHero'}
7th April 2007:
Wow. That was intense. I almost died at the end of the last chapter. I always like a happy ending with out too much fluff. I really love the way you write and I am going to read your other stories now.
~CJ
Author's Response: Thanks, not many people liked the ending I think... it was a bit too rushed and I didn't plan the story very well. Thanks for the review.
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{reviewid: 1306566, reviewer: 'ralj1640'}
14th February 2007:
Ok that was a bad ending. i will not give you any constructive critsim because. I will not lie or beat around the bush. The ending was bad. you did not leave us with qustions that the reader can just imagan. You just left us hanging. you need tyo come out with a sucal or have me as a hater. (No smily face for you)
Author's Response: Oh damn... cause you know all the reviews I've recived so far praising this story, your smily face means a whole lot.
Find something better to do. Or even tell me how to improve it. Just by saying its a bad ending wont change squat.
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{reviewid: 1306554, reviewer: 'ralj1640'}
14th February 2007:
i don't feel that you are caputeing the chaters fellings right.
Author's Response: I don't feel like you should bother coming back to any of my stories. Your being too negetive.
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{reviewid: 1306550, reviewer: 'ralj1640'}
14th February 2007:
that was so out of chacter for mogonagall.
Author's Response: Was there anything you liked here? Or do you just like telling me that it sucks.
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{reviewid: 1305699, reviewer: 'rain%20on%20me'}
13th February 2007:
omgg that was like one of the best stories ive read on here so far!!! u have 2 promise 2 write a sequal!!!
Author's Response: Thanks :) Ahh... but I dont know what to write?
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{reviewid: 1293269, reviewer: 'andharrywokeup'}
4th February 2007:
I really liked this ending ... so different and so full of hope. The only thing I really noticed throughout this story was tenses! Watch out! Well Done!
Author's Response: Ahhh... damn tenses. I'll fix them when I can. Thank you
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{reviewid: 1293249, reviewer: 'andharrywokeup'}
| Review #10, by andharrywokeup | Waiting |
4th February 2007:
A wonderful beginning. You need to watch out for your tenses...you skip from past to present. Otherwise full of potential :) ~ Andy, reviewers circle on SAYS.
Author's Response: Ahh.. thank you. I will fix it. Thanks :D
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{reviewid: 1245288, reviewer: 'pengunigirl234597'}
29th December 2006:
Yay Ron lived. This story was awesome! I look forward to reading some of your other stories.
Author's Response: Ohhh thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it!
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{reviewid: 1236443, reviewer: 'Shii%20and%20Nel'}
21st December 2006:
I love this story, but it doesn't seem to be quite concluded. I understand if you're tired of this story, but there just seem to be a few holes. Viktor, what life will be like, what teaching, specifically, will be like for Ron, etc.
But I still loved this story. I like your writing style. :D
Author's Response: Good point, I've started going through the story and fixing up all the holes that must be filled. Thank you for your help. I was hoping for one of those endings that I could pick it up later and write, but for now, I need a break.
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{reviewid: 1234526, reviewer: 'Mrs_Roonil_Wazlib'}
20th December 2006:
Not a bad ending! sequel? No? aww! lol
Author's Response: There might be, but I just don't know what to do! lol... thank you :)
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{reviewid: 1234448, reviewer: 'Cathyn%20Potter'}
20th December 2006:
Love the ending!!
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{reviewid: 1234446, reviewer: 'Cathyn%20Potter'}
20th December 2006:
Love the ending!!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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{reviewid: 1234324, reviewer: 'H2P2'}
19th December 2006:
no sequel? It was a great story thought. ;-). thanks!1
Author's Response: There could be, I just dont know what I could do with it.
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{reviewid: 1231936, reviewer: 'Shaylee_FontetPotter'}
17th December 2006:
OMG! I'm hooked on yet another story. Please update soon!
~Shaylee~
Author's Response: Will do! thanks :)
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{reviewid: 1229480, reviewer: 'pisceandreams'}
15th December 2006:
OMG!!! I thought they defeated Voldemort.
Author's Response: Ohhh... cliffie!!!
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{reviewid: 1229471, reviewer: 'pisceandreams'}
15th December 2006:
OOO.what's going to happen???
Author's Response: You'll see ;)
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{reviewid: 1229444, reviewer: 'pisceandreams'}
15th December 2006:
Great chapter. I'm not usually a Hermione and Ron fan having recently been converted to Hermione Draco, but I can't wait to read this story...or more of it anyways.
Author's Response: Thank you!
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{reviewid: 1229125, reviewer: 'Hermi'}
15th December 2006:
No! You killed Ron! Why? *cries* Update soon!
Author's Response: Sorry! lol... the next chapter will be up soon.
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{reviewid: 1228333, reviewer: 'wierdiskewl'}
14th December 2006:
when is the next chapter comin out?
Author's Response: As soon as I can write it!
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{reviewid: 1228065, reviewer: 'kooldude'}
14th December 2006:
why did u kill ron
Author's Response: ah...?
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{reviewid: 1227830, reviewer: 'hellsangel_xx'}
14th December 2006:
love the plot. could have made it a bit mroe special since all of the fan fictions are similar.
(:
Author's Response: I don't quite understand what you mean... ahwell.. thanks..
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{reviewid: 1227741, reviewer: 'Cathryn%20Potter'}
13th December 2006:
ohhh
how sad poor ron and hermione
Author's Response: yeah... thanks :)
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