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Review #1, by fashionist Sally's Step Brother

19th June 2009:
I agree with the previous comments. Your story has a lot of potential, but in order for it to improve, you need to work on your spelling and grammar.

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Review #2, by Fall Season Sally's Step Brother

18th March 2007:
I agree with everything ss10009 said. Don't stop writing and keep up the hard work!

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Review #3, by ss10009 Sally's Step Brother

5th December 2006:
erm...don't take this as a flame 'cause I think you are a new author and all but I have a few suggestions

-- improve your grammar
-- go to wikipedia and look up mary sue
-- this story is moving way to fast and is a bit unrealistic, maybe you could test this version out and then write a better, remastered version

I do like your effort though, rawk on with 10 stars! ^_^

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