Wow, what a beautiful piece of writing!
The banner is awesome -- its what drew me in.
However, on the fourth sentence before the end, it says " . . . and wit Hough hesitating . . ."
Overall, a good story.
~mbr Report Review
I really like this story.
And the banner is amazing!!! That's honestly why I read this story.
I was actually wondering if you could make me a banner... it would be so great if you could. If you decide to email me at email@example.com Thank you so much.
~randomcutie69~ Report Review
Brilliant. Report Review
I didn't know you wrote stories too.
This is really amazing. It is highly emotional, and Ron and Hermione say all the right things. Though I really hope Hermione was a bit to pestimistic. And Don't worry about spelling Hermione wrong. I did that too. And I can up it because I spelt Voldemort wrong too.
By the way the banner you made me is amazing! Report Review
This is such a moving story, I really loved it, it made me cry. The ending is especially beautiful. Report Review
Great! A short little moment, and I hope you don't mind a few things of constructive critism.
Hermioen should be Hermione. Just a typo. =D
and He stood up straight, a fire had seemed to ignited in his belly, and wit Hough hesitating, should be with out hestitaing
I'm pretty sure they are just typos, but other than those two things that I snagged....it's good! Well done! Report Review
hi wow your writing is amazing
i rli like these to lines they are very touching:“He wants us to lose faith, lose hope, but I won’t let that happen.”
and His life, and all the people in it had been cursed since that fateful night, over sixteen years ago, and it was time to break that curse. Once and for all.
your story is amazing *add to favourites* well done keep writing
*puts it in favourites*
well done, it was brilliant, alot different and better then what people normally write on the final battle
nice banner tooAuthor's Response: aw, thank you! and all credi for the banner goes to x_halawa_x, she's wonderful! Report Review
What a wonderful story =)
This line makes me want to cry: "His life, and all the people in it had been cursed since that fateful night, over sixteen years ago, and it was time to break that curse." Report Review
well, that was gripping. i swear, i never pictured the battle like that. or the fact that the order and evryone else was harry's 'line of defence'.
hehe, wot a cheesy name. :P
gr8 story. write more! :D
Beautiful! Your writing's amazing! Report Review
That was really sad. *tear* Really well-written! A few typos here and there, but whatever... we all have those. :P
I love the dynamics between the trio. They seem very realistic. I love this line: " He was past the point of being frightened. He’d lived in fear all his life, and he seemed past that point now." Great work! :] Report Review
hehe!! i really liked that, that was well written great job!! =D 10/10!!! Report Review
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