Wow! :D I can see where this is going with Hermione and Malfoy! :D And I'm liking it! hehe! :)
You are a very good writer! Amazing at describing! :D
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Eeek! :) Malfoy! I love him! haha! :) I like this chapter! :) I'm going to read the next chapter now! :)
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careful not too much romanceyness. Report Review
hmmm.. out of character but screw it. dramione fics are da bomb Report Review
you need to hurry up with the next chapter plz Report Review
you should make them have a madly passionat relationship... :) Report Review
This is so good.Good work. Report Review
Sounds like fun! Report Review
Wow, this story is really good so far, great job! Report Review
Interesting!! I like it!! UPDATE! :) :) Author's Response: Glad you liked, thanks for reviewing. Report Review
This story gets more and more interesting with time. I am astounded by the plot, and elated that we finally know what she's attempting to brew. You did a fantastic job of making the chapter flow, and I absolutely loved everything about this chapter. The fight between Hermione and Draco was wonderful, they have such a great chemistry!! I loved all of your writings from text books, your very creative. All in all another great chapter and I am waiting impatiently to see what is going to happen next.Author's Response: I like writing excerpts from other made up literature, because you can put your own little quirks into it. Every time J.K. puts something into the series from Witch Weekly or the Daily Prophet, it makes me wish I had a copy to flip through myself. Anyways, thanks for review, I'll start writing the next chapter as soon as I am able. Report Review
Another interesting chapter. I love this story, it's amazing. The characters seem so life like, and this story seems probable. Amazing, update soon please!Author's Response: I'm glad you like how I've expanded on the characters, I try my best not to make them too over the top insane. I promise that as soon as the next chapter is written and proofread I'll post it. Until then, thanks for your review. Report Review
Please update when you canAuthor's Response: I'll do my best, im hoping that the last plot turn in ch 5 will help keep me from writing myself into a corner and the next chapter will come more easily. Report Review
Woot metric. This summer when I went to the states I had no idea how long a mile was I had to ask my friends if they knew how long that was in a kilometere. But anyways I love this story. Normally i'm just not a dramione person. I can't stand the way the ship is shown, and it's horrbile normally. But this story is amazing. Anyways I love this story and is going into favorites now! Update soon!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad to know I've broken the usual dramione mold. I'll put the next chapter up for validation as soon as the rest of it's written and proofread. Report Review
ii love it!!!Author's Response: Thank you! Report Review
Creative yet again! It's a wonderful chapter, please add chapter 5 soon! Author's Response: I wish chapter 5 would come to me as easily as the others had. School's been hectic, and until some stroke of genius trips over my feet, I'm a bit stuck. I guess you could say I know where I want to take the story but my car's in the shop. I will try to update as soon as humanly possible! Report Review
What a great story...so far, at least ;)
Let's see, a couple of points in terms of review...
~I like how you've referred back to the canon to support your story, such as when describing Hermione's, erm, "mental limits"--which, I might add, are quite similar to mine...
~When changing Malfoy's character to suit your story, it didn't sound, em, "fanficky" like many others. I guess what I mean is, Malfoy wasn't completely unbelievable, because you gave an explanation that actually made sense...He had changed since his father went to jail...Harry and Ron obviously don't have the sense to notice it...Being slightly isolated with his own room as Head Boy, his new attitude would be less noticeable to others...etc, etc.
All in all, I think you're a strong writer (do you do well in English class? =D ) and I'm really enjoying your fanfiction :D. I think it would be an 11 out of 10...
ciao Author's Response: Thank you so much for you're in-depth review! It is really appreciated and I'm glad you like the creative liberties I've taken with the characters. I always like to research books 1-5, looking for ways to support what I've said and to make sure I'm not stepping on JKR's toes to have something go my way. Thank you for taking the time to notice that. As for the last part, I've deserted English class, most likely forever. Other than my fanfics (which I've only recently gotten into writing) the only writing I do is chem lab reports. That whole "love of chemistry" thing, yeah that's all me and I absolutely wish I could make Potions myself. Enough blather from the author though. Cheers! Report Review
I absolutely loved this chapter, it was amazing. I love the chemistry between Draco and Hermione, it's so easy to see how they could let themselves fall into something more than friendship. As for Hermione's scene with the spider, one of the most geniunely funny things I have read on this site. I could say that about all your chapters, you have amazing talent and I am eager to see more!Author's Response: I am glad you find my style funny and all the positive feedback has been wonderful. Ironically I never liked writing in English class in high school... Report Review
i just started to read yoiur story and i really loved it!Author's Response: Thanks for the review and the add to your favorites, I am flattered! Report Review
i really like this piece....you're so true to all the characters...especially at the beginning when hermione's talking to herself...keep writing...i want to know who the potion's for!! i also like your attention to grammar and punctuation, i'm kind of a freak for that stuff (wouldn't tell from this review, but trust me) i'm kind of begging, but could you read my hpff? i want reviews, and haven't many....probably cause its not so good, but if you could give me your oppinion? thanks, this was really good!Author's Response: I've read your story and anyone reading this response should go and do the same. And review! Because I was impressed. So shoo! Go read! Report Review
Actually, America is just about the only place that doesn't use the metric system. :) Anyway, 10/10
-BlazeAuthor's Response: I know, and it's killing me over here, because metric is SO much better than what we have, but changing over would cost so much money and well, you know how the government is about that... Report Review
I've never thought of that before, of how Americans use different measurements and stuff than say England or Canada. Actually, I wasn't sure what England used really, I just assumed it was the same standards that Canada used. It's an interesting concept to think about, of how many people this book influences.
But anyways . . .great story. I'm really getting into it. The anticipation is killing me. Malfoy is being so nice to Hermione, I'm just waiting for "something" to happen between them. That was so sweet of him with her shoes!! *sigh* Do you think you could drop a hint of when that "something" might happen??? Author's Response: Haha, I wouldn't want to spoil it, but to be honest the next chapter decided to be a real pain in the neck. It's acting like 11-year-old Malfoy! So it's maybe half done, but what I have I don't exactly like, so I may just start over. *sigh* I might say what the Elixir is for next chapter but I can't make any promises. Report Review
How the hell can hermione be so afraid of spiders? That is funny...Author's Response: Actually I wrote that after my own terrifying experience with an arachnid in my bedroom. He got away and I slept in the guest bedroom. I hate spiders. Report Review
Hehehe...this is funny...I cannot imagine ANYONE in the Harry Potter series saying heebee jeebees...maybe a first year...but still. Lol Report Review
LMAO....Ahahaha....typical drama queen Malfoy...he's quite a bit preppy here... Report Review
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