Ohhh detention with Malfoy wouldn't be bad at all, but why doesn't she like him?

Author's Response: ha. im not the biggest malfoy fan, but i'd have to admit it wouldnt be too bad
;P

the reason she doesnt like him....will come in later chapters
:D

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hm, very interesting... keep up the good work ^_^

Author's Response: thanks so much for reviewind
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Nice first chapter! I wish I can know a bit more about Lillian though, but I guess that would come in due time, I better be patient! : )

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It's sounds good so far. You definitely have talent for writing McGonagall, you've made her sound perfectly like the McGonagall from the book, excellent work! I'm interested to know more about this new character you've introduced. I like the idea of a character who isn't interested in Draco Malfoy. This is going on my favorites!

But by the way, "loose" means like, "loose instead of tight." The word you're looking for is "lose".

Author's Response: thanks. im glad you enjoy it so far.
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DUDE! I'm pretty much excited but am i really dead?

Author's Response: yes
:( sorry. but youre snotty does that help?

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dude, lillian berlin (hmmm i wonder where you got that name from? lmao)

Author's Response: haha lmao

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I like this story soo far. Really Good.

Author's Response: aww thanks. im hoping to get the next chapter up soon. so be on the look out

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