you have got to stop wth the "Hermyi.. Hermon, bloody hell, why didn't they call you something simple, like Janet" thing because it is seriously annoying the hell out of me and i can't read the story proprly so i'm not getting the plott much, honestly it is really annoying. definaty not funny, please stick with "Hermione" in the future because it is not doing you any good, no credit is being recieved. 3/10 Report Review
Cut out using the word "puppies" instead of eyes, it gets annoying, and use "Hermione" instead of the other thing you use. it's a great plott though ot would be better with the proper stuff! 6 and a 1/2 out of 10 Report Review
great story :) loved everything Report Review
Noel and Tony date. SEQUEL IMMEDIATELY This was brilliant! Report Review
Oh my god! I LOVE friends so much! Even though it's over the reruns are still the best show on tv so I love that you added that in there. Also, it's so frustrating that Hermione is such a spoiled bitch if only she'd see how Draco is being so kind. I really hope she comes back to her old self. Lastly, Noel is so cute! Report Review
Amazing chapter; loved reading it. I truly hope there will be a sequel to it. The Noel & Tony thing seems to be starting out as prestages of flirtatious feelings. Precious! Hope to see more. Report Review
most romantic chapter yet! i loved it. it was amazing!!! great work! i wish it would just keep going! Report Review
I love the last part.
Your Russian? If you are, you and me are alot alike. Report Review
OMG! Fooling around with Ron?! Draco has a motorcycle? What?! I am confused. Report Review
So sweet! Loved it! Great! Report Review
"Hey, sexy," she bubbled, lacking the tone of her usual rude voice.
"Oh, lord," Draco said.
LOL! Nearly died of laughter! Report Review
Like the plot so far. Report Review
really liked your story!! i couldn't take my eyes off of it!! :D I would love it if you did a Noel-Tony story!! Report Review
IF TONY AND NOEL DONT GET TOGETHER I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN, KIDNAP YOU AND MAKE YOU WRITE THAT THEY END UP TOGETHER. just saying :) Report Review
your so funny! i love this story so far its awesome! i love how you've portrayed hermione (skinny and beautiful and stuff) cos thats how i rekon she'd be. AWESOME story and noel is AWESOME times 10 Report Review
LOVE THIS CHAPTER!!! I mean it ;) It was sad first but funny when they had that little fight. Loved when Draco was so happy about being a father again. You will not guess that I've read this story in less than 3 hours ;) Report Review
great chapter ;) and btw? Are you swedish? :P If you are, try to translate this xD Jätte bra kapitel, jag verkligen älskar dem två tillsammans. Såklart så skulle det kunna vara bättre men allt kan inte vara perfekt. Report Review
Okay this is so OOC but I can't stop reading. It's great so far! :] Report Review
that is the best drramione ive read so far!1 Report Review
Why did he give up magic?
Why did he take magic back up?
Why was Hermione so thin with blonde highlights? Report Review
Superlike this chapter. Report Review
Loving the story so far. I agree with some other reviewers, there seems to be a serious lack when it comes to the use of magic. I understand that you stated that Draco turned his back on the Wizarding World, which I honestly find difficult to believe as its very OOC for him, but it makes for an interesting story. I like the fact he's still friends with Blaise, although Blaise seems a little OOC, even though in the books he isn't mentioned too much. The way you describe him in here reminds me of the black super hero friend in the Incredibles haha, which isn't a bad thing I guess.
But yes, I didn't understand why Hermionie couldn't just fix the curtain with magic. She seems pretty OOC if you ask me, but it could just be because its like ten years on from Hogwarts days.
Also I take it you're American as there are a lot of Americanisms in your story. One thing that kind of ticks me of about fanfics, a lot of American writers not familiar with British terms, which is not your fault. But I thought many things would be obvious, such as the fact that Draco would leave her 20 pounds, not dollars. You could also use the British slang of 20 quid if you wanted. Any Brit would know what you were talking about. I suggest looking up some common British terms and slang to make the story more real and relateable, especially to us British readers haha.
Didn't mean to nitpick, just some pointers.
Other than that, loving the story, can't wait to finish it! Thanks for all the time and effort you put into it! Report Review
the cane just ruins the moment.it would've been better if he straddled hermione when he recovered Report Review
ron and hermione shouldnt have slept together.it just doesnt work out you know.other than that the chapter is good Report Review
i LOVEit.its so awesome.i have to hand it to you.its its bloody amazing.good job Report Review
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