Ebony seems really nice. And Brian sounds like a major hottie. :D I want a brian.Author's Response: me too....Brian is really based on a real guy...but of course i spiced him up a little. now, he's perfect.. thanks for the review, and make sure to keep an eye out for the next one, white gold and silver. i have some tricks up my sleeve for that one. I just have to get the motivation to type it up put it up for validaion. it's already written. Report Review
Great story, waiting for more.Author's Response: thanx the last part just got validated. review and tell me how you like it. there IS going to be a sequel. Thanx for reviewing! Report Review
I really like this story, it's different from most stuff I read on this site.Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
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I think it's great! I can't wait for the next one.Author's Response: thanks!!! It means a lot. I promise that the next one will be longer and hopefully better.
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