it was really good but there were a few spelling erorrs. i love how you added the song in it really made it to the mood.

Author's Response: thanks! I'll look for those errors!

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This was sad. I like how you stopped rgiht when Ginny had decided to talk to Harry. It was kinda like a cliffie. Cool!

Author's Response: I need to re-writ the second chappie, cus it was to short :(

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TE HE HE I'M A DORK, reveiwing my own stories, lol, I'M THIS DESPRATE FOR REVEIWS WA

Author's Response: I DON'T LIKE RESPONDING TO MY OWN REVEIWS THAT I'VE LEFT FOR MY OWN STORIES!

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i REALLY want to know what happens next!!! so PLEASE update sooooon! lol i really liked it.....who sings the song?.....i dont know whos having a harder time....it sorta looks like both of them...anyway i better stop before i go on and on, update soon!
10/10
~Ravenclaw_girl~

Author's Response: i think it's updated, hey read my other stuff, thanks much

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It was a little confusing... and the ending was unclear. Maybe it would help if you put the flashback in Italics, and the song lyrics in bold so they stand out... that can always help. But I just felt like they needed to actually talk to each other, you know?

Author's Response: i tried and i does the whole thing in italics or bold and the ending was weird cus there's gonna be a second chappie

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It was ok.~_~

Author's Response: thanks

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