I love this book!!! keep writing!!! I oved how you portrayed Regulus! It's amazing this book. IT'S FRIGGEN AWSUM! Report Review
Aw man. Aw man. Aw man. aw man. Aw man.
I LOVE THIS STORY!
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I loved it! Report Review
Please continue! It's an absolutely adorable story, and I can't wait to read more about them! Report Review
Believe it or not, I actually like this story ten times better than Delicate! Sure there are a few writing mistakes! But I love it so much more! I had no idea she would lose her voice like that! I think that perhaps there should be more ease into each characters feelings! But! I really do love this story! Please keep going! It is so imaginative! I would have never come up with something like this! :D keep going please? Report Review
You're so good! Keep writing?:) Report Review
No, it's over! You NEED to update this, I'm begging you. I want to find out what happens at the Christmas party and when Remus meets Darcy's parents. I also just want to see what happens in general. Please continue, it's such a great story. :) Report Review
“I like you Darcy. I like you a lot. I might even be falling in love with you,” he said, Darcy felt her heart catch and Remus continued, “And I was hoping. . .I was hoping you would be my girlfriend. . .”
Wow, I loved these lines so much. They made my day, I'm so hooked! Only one more chapter :( Report Review
Okay, this chapter was great, probably my favorite. The scene with the Marauders at the end was so funny, with everyone being afraid of Remus. But...ugh, Darcy and Remus were so close to kissing. I'm starting to feel bad for Aaron, but I still love Darcy and Remus. Report Review
Oh, Aaron needs to go away and let Remus and Darcy be! Just kidding, I like the twist he adds to the story (though I'm totally team Demus :D). I saw that coming a little, but it wasn't that obvious. It's kind of cute, actually, how he was her best friend that wanted more. But still, I love Darcy and Remus together more.Author's Response: haha. team Demus. THat's adorable :) Report Review
So glad Sirius stood up for Regulus, I would have been so mad if he didn't, a sibling myself! Don't worry, I wasn't confused when reading this. :) Report Review
I love how human Sirius is in this chapter, I really am beginning to like both the Black brothers in this story. It was also good to step away from Remus a little in this chapter, and show how Darcy has a life besides Remus, which is something a good character should show. Nice job! :) Report Review
Wow, what a cliffhanger ending to the chapter. I'm glad Darcy is going to listen to Sirius, and you're really show how Sirius is human, despite all his jokes. Love, love, love this story! Report Review
Oh my, when Remus held Darcy's hand... I can hardly describe it, it was just so perfect. That's all I can say. :) Report Review
Remus is just so cute, I blushed myself when James and Sirius were making fun of Remus for liking Darcy, making him blush. The title for this chapter is so perfect! Report Review
Ooh, I'm so nervous for her to get to Hogwarts! Not only do I love Darcy and Remus together, but I like how you portray Lily and James' relationship, I hope they end up together in your story! My favorite line by far was, "'Every day at ten fifty-two,' Sirius nodded." It made me laugh so hard! Great job, can't wait to read more! :) Report Review
I was afraid Darcy was going to hate Lupin, or blame Lupin, but I'm so glad she doesn't, I love them too much for her to hate him! Anyhow, I really love this story, I love it so much that I'm ignoring my homework just to read this! This is such a cute story, I can't stop reading it. :D Report Review
Wow, this is so original and great, I'm hooked! I love how she used to talk so much, but now she can't talk at all. I wonder how this will affect her and Lupin's relationship! Report Review
I love Darcy, she's so original, unique, but at the same time she reminds me of a friend which makes me feel like I can relate with her. I love Lupin, he's always been one of my favorite characters, and him and Darcy together are so cute. I love this! :) Report Review
did darcy ever have the lessons with Dumbledore? Or were they just not mentioned?
I love this story! Please update soon? Can't wait!!
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You are lovely. Completely lovely. Report Review
I love it! Seriously! It's definitely one of my favorite Marauder stories - I really, really like it. Update soon! Report Review
This chapter was friggin' awesome. I loved it. I especially loved Dumbledores' last lines. It's going to be pretty cool to see how Darcy adapts to her silence. I wonder how Aaron and Remus are going to react at her inability to communicate verbally, as well. Report Review
I like Darcy. :) She seems so genuine and sweet. I'm excited to see how this story develops! Report Review
This is really good! Report Review
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