Haha, that was funny! I love it! Report Review
Very good =P Report Review
What a great answer lol. Great story. Report Review
Oh! This was definitely a funny chappie!! Report Review
Ha!!! That was really good. I actually believed that it was from Petunia's point-of-view, which is something not alot of authors on this site can do. All of that stuff about "no waking Dudders" and things like that were really believeable. Great funny story!!!!!
~Tabby, the Kat Author's Response: Thanks for your review :) Writing Petunia was fun actually, a change from the norm anyway. I'm glad you liked the fic. Report Review
I liked it..Yes i had always wondered what happened to them!Very realistic senareo..I actually may like Petunia a bit in this fic..thou i dunno if she would be as optomistic and impassive about Dudley and magic, i think she might have been more parshal for ranting and venting.However it did not detract from my overall love of it.Well done , great summary it caught my eye imediately !!Author's Response: Thanks :D I'm glad you liked the fic! Report Review
lolAuthor's Response: Thanks for the review, I hope the 'lol' means you liked it and found it funny hehe. Report Review
You are a very talented writer, with a nose for understanding char. You also have a distinctive style very unlike others. I have read some of your all dialogue stories as well, but this story proves you can also write description well and you choose such an interesting topic by undertaking one of JKR unanswered questions.
I greatly enjoyed this.
I like to offset praise with criticism, but I've had a hard time finding anything specific to critcize here. Your very close to being among the top writers on this site. You're not quite there for some undefinable reason. It might just be word choose, which is hard to quantify, or it might be that you focus a little to much on fluffy pieces.
I'd like to see you use your talent for true angst or for a battle scene. I think you prob have more talent then you realize or display.
I wish I had your ability to decribe char and write dialogue as dialogue is my greatest weakness and the ability write great and true sounding dialogue is what seperates the pedestrain writers from the succesful ones Dialogue is also one of JKR's great stenghts.
Overall a great job. This is a 9!
Author's Response: Wow, thankyou so much for your amazing review! Dialogue is one of my favourite things to write - it seems to come easier to me than description, and I'm happy that this shows in my writing. Thankyou once again for your review, and I'm glad you liked the story :) Report Review
This was lovely, and funny! It made me laugh aloud at some parts, especially when it got to the table part, and I understood how Petunia had got off the island on her own. Very well done! You made me actually like the Durselys for a little while!Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad that you enjoyed it! And to actually make you like the Dursley's - well, that's an accomplishment in itself :D Report Review
I loved it! It was very well-written! I give it a 10/10!Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it. Report Review
Cute. Entertaing and funny,
All around a great read. Author's Response: Thanks! Glad that it had all those aspects to it that you enjoyed :D Report Review
lol sorry - i didnt have time to sign in, and I thought I had reviewed this - ah well - here i am now hehe!
My dear roo! You never fail to amaze me with your writing and this was just...brilliant! As always, brilliant!!Author's Response: Hey sharon! Thanks for the review and glad you liked it! :D Report Review
lol i loved it! Well written Amy, well done! Author's Response: Yay, glad you liked it! Report Review
heehee....i have always wondered what happened to the Dursleys on the rock. Author's Response: Thankyou for the review! Well, now you know! Report Review
Oh you moo! You should have left them there!!! Oh, you have a typo somewhere... 'Dursleys', I think it is... hehe. BUT... erm.... LMAO. :D Haha this was funny, as most of your fics are, and it has made me laugh, which is always a good thing lol. Me enjoyed it :P Well done on another well-written fic :) Lis xxAuthor's Response: Hey Lisa! Well, leaving them there wouldn't have kept to canon now, would it? And you know how much I love canon :D Thanks for your review though, glad you liked the fic :) Report Review
This one cracked me up! Petunia and her carrot cake, Vernon and his blustering, and Dudley with his piggy tail - classic. I love how you portrayed Petunia as not always being the dutiful wife and having her little piece of rebellion against her husband, even if it was tiny. Not to mention the fact that she can't swim and yet she's the one that has to make it back to shore. A very funny little one-shot that answers one of the possible ways the Dursleys could have gotten off that island - though it would have been nice if they had to stay there forever. Great work.Author's Response: Wow, thanks for your lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed it, and my portrayal of Petunia, which sort of wrote itself as I was writing the fic. Thanks again :) Report Review
Hahahaha....Author's Response: I'm taking this as you liked it lol. Thanks! Report Review
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