It was good.
you need to do a fair bit of editting though.
(I can't really say much about that though!!) Report Review
that had a good story. but you really badly need to correct the spelling mistakes. I csn do it if you want me to. It will make your story easier to read. Report Review
cooooooooooooooooooolio! Report Review
Really Great Story!! Please write next chapter!!
Write me back and give me a clue on the next chapter.
YOUR LOYAL FANAuthor's Response: Hi, SIS!!!!! I todaly got you!!!!!!!!!!!
Well i new your login-name but....watever......Well you will just have to read and find out ......wont you now !!!!! ( Evil Laugh) !!!!! Well dont read this on read the Hary/Ginny one...Well i still have to right it.......but....whatever well we are going to the movie!!!!! Love you!!
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hi it is me!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH>>>>>>> i ams so exsited!!!Author's Response: AHHHHHH Report Review
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