5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by zephyr_138 The Bump

24th January 2007:
It was good.
you need to do a fair bit of editting though.
(I can't really say much about that though!!)

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Review #2, by random harry [potter fan RUN!

14th December 2006:
that had a good story. but you really badly need to correct the spelling mistakes. I csn do it if you want me to. It will make your story easier to read.

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Review #3, by 'oijuoiuoijuihddd RUN!

28th September 2006:
cooooooooooooooooooolio!

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Review #4, by just another potter fan The Bump

29th July 2006:
Really Great Story!! Please write next chapter!!
Write me back and give me a clue on the next chapter.
YOUR LOYAL FAN

Author's Response: Hi, SIS!!!!! I todaly got you!!!!!!!!!!!

Well i new your login-name but....watever......Well you will just have to read and find out ......wont you now !!!!! ( Evil Laugh) !!!!! Well dont read this on read the Hary/Ginny one...Well i still have to right it.......but....whatever well we are going to the movie!!!!! Love you!!

YOUR LOYAL SISTER


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Review #5, by Lily_James_4_ever The Bump

25th July 2006:
hi it is me!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHH>>>>>>> i ams so exsited!!!

Author's Response: AHHHHHH

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