OH MY GOD! You're an amazing writer! Seriously amazing!
Again your characterizations are amazing! It's difficult to have a good Volde/Tom romance fic that doesn't turn him into some mushy romantic character. You did it perfectly!
You had me enthralled from the beginning!
It works really well as a one-shot.
Well done! :D
10/10 Report Review
Wow, this one-shot was awesome! I'm definitely going to start reading more Tom/OCfics! ^^Author's Response: Yay! Glad to spark that. thanks for the review :) hope you find lots of other interesting Tom fics, i've come across quite a couple. Report Review
OIy I liked it!Author's Response: yay! i like that you liked it Report Review
Awesome! I really liked it. Kind of told what might have happened when Tom Riddle was at school, and I like how you told it through Elle's eyes. 10/10Author's Response: Thank youu. I really want to go back and make it a short story at least, but I’m too busy with my other two WIPs. I will after though. Report Review
Wow, I enjoyed this so much. The ending was unfinished, yet finished. I loved it.
I can't really pinpoint why. It's the entire piece. Author's Response: haha awww thank you :D Report Review
WOW. I've never really pictured Tom being capable of love, but this definitely changed my perspective. You kept Tom in character which is really important. You also really put a lot of emotion into this, and it showed. I absolutely loved it, keep up the amazing work!
DelaneyAuthor's Response: heheh thank you :) Tom Riddle is this paradox of a character that I hate but am fascinated by. The fact that he is both extremely evil and extremely charming is probably the reason. Report Review
Oh. Wow. That was great :) This is, just so you know, the first Tom Riddle fic I've ever read.
-adds to favourites-
Awesome job!! Author's Response: Yay! Thank you. It was actually a Tom/OC fic that inspired me to write my own fan fiction. It showed me that things don’t have to be as they seem etc. etc. I forgot the title of the story which I’m really upset about though :( maybe one day i'll find it again... Report Review
that was a really intersting look at tom riddle, im just wondering how did Ellie die?Author's Response: i know i know i have to go back and change this from one-shot to short story to fill in all the spaces. i will someday, really. :)) Report Review
Awesome story...but how did Elle die? Was she one of the other six people that Tom had to kill even though he loved her? Just curious...anywho good work ^^Author's Response: sorrry i know it is very open ended but you'll have to stay curious for a little while longer. i'll really try go back and fix all the holes once i'm done with my sirius fic :) thank you so much for the review!! Report Review
Ha! This was a very good fic^^. I was hesitant to read it, because I have a giant fear of sad and depressing endings. But this wasn't that, and beleive you me, that made me quite the happy girl. Anyway, I loved the way you made Tom's character. Original, yet not out of character. Very good! Author's Response: yay! im glad you liked it Report Review
wow your a very good descriptive writer. keep up the good work!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
hey, that was seriously awesome. it sorta has a loose end, like what happened to ellie, but it was still pretty great. depending on where you take your story, i am sure there will be an explaination on why Voldy shuns love. i like how you captured their relationship, like first, then love and elie's part and confusion on tom's part, it brings out his character really well. 3cheers!
(btw, YAY! 1ST REVIEWER)Author's Response: Thank you so much! Ill go back and tie up the ends someday, im just working on another story for now. :) :) Report Review
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