Reading Reviews for The Fulfillment of a Promise
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Review #1, by Feather3 Wily, Warlike, Whomping Willow

20th November 2008:
It's such a good story. I love it. You don't do any of the annoying things sooo many other authors do. You have update, it's too good.

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Review #2, by Elle Winters Eileen

18th March 2007:
This is very good

Poor Eileen

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I hope you continue to enjoy the next few chapters. Constructive criticism is more than welcome at the moment, because I've been struggling with my "wordiness" and grammatical errors, so I hope you'll not hesitate to let me know if you find any! (The wordiness will be harder to edit out than grammatical errors, however...) :)

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Review #3, by Jonathanbabe Wily, Warlike, Whomping Willow

17th March 2007:
another good chappie. please continue!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'll try to update soon, but the next few chapters that I've written really need some heavy editing at the moment. :) I'll finish them off as soon as possible.

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Review #4, by Starlight Sprite Chapter 7: The Sorting Ceremony

2nd March 2007:
Keep it up! feel free to read and review my story... its my first fan fic so plz be nice.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! And sure, I'd love to stop by and read your story. ("plz be nice"? Oh, no. Why would I be nice? I'll be visciously cruel and nasty!) ;) Of course I'll review courteously.

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Review #5, by BlackRoses911 Missing Puffskien/Don't Be Rude

14th February 2007:
This is very good! I love it! Besides the brilliant way you had them all meet, I LOVED your impression of Pettigrew. Most people make him out to be some blundering fool but I highly doubt that Remus, Sirius, or James would have befriended him, had that been the case. BRILLIANT!


Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah, I don't buy the "blundering fool" Pettigrew either. I mean, sure he's twitchy when Sirius and Remus are about to kill him, in the presence of Lord Voldemort, or in the presence of Snape...but those are the only situations we've seen him in aside from the Pensieve memory. I'd be twitchy in those situations too! :D Thanks so much for reviewing. It's always a relief to hear my chapter didn't stink. I'm always so nervous when I post. :)

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Review #6, by holly bergman Missing Puffskien/Don't Be Rude

12th January 2007:
Wow...James and Sirius...dare I say it...fighting? Now that is an original idea. Excellent Story!

Author's Response: Yeah. I really didn't think they'd be immediate friends. After all, he IS a descendant of the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black, and James isn't one to look beyond a first impression very often, is he?

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Review #7, by holly bergman The Invisible Man

12th January 2007:
*smirk*Yep, that's James! This was another great chapter...reading on now...

Author's Response: I've always felt that James gets a lot of criticism because of the Snape's Worst Memory chapter in OotP. Although he's certainly not my favorite Marauder (that would be Remus!), I think he was a sweet (somewhat arrogant) kid who got carried away sometimes, but all in all is a good person and means well. Thanks for reviewing! I'd better go update...

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Review #8, by holly bergman An Avid Reader

12th January 2007:
I wondered where this one went...Well I've found it again and it's still as good as ever. You write characters really well. Remus is my favourite of the marauders and this chapter was really sweet and sad. Excellent Job.

Author's Response: Remus is my favorite of the marauders too! :) I'm glad you like the story so far... sometimes I get so frustrated. After editing a chapter and publishing it, I prefer to not read it again. It's too painful! I catch all these little changes I'd like to make, but they're too minor to get worked up over. Live and learn, I guess... :D

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Review #9, by Jonathanbabe Missing Puffskien/Don't Be Rude

21st December 2006:
AWSOME STORY! Please continue.

Author's Response: Wow, you mean someone is still reading my story?! I'm flattered. :D Sure, next chapter, coming right up! (I've written up to chapter 15, I believe, I just haven't posted them all yet since it takes a while for them to pass through the submission process...)

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Review #10, by holly bergman A Loving Household

16th August 2006:
Great chapter. Keep it up.

Author's Response: Thanks! Chapter 4, coming up soon (hopefully).

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Review #11, by holly bergman Cucumber Sandwiches

11th August 2006:
Another great chapter!! Give yourself a pat on the back for this one. Well thought out, good characters and the relationships and emotions were exceptionally well done.

Author's Response: Cucumber Sandwiches was one of my favorite chapters to write because Lily and Petunia's relationship is fun to work with. Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #12, by _Prongs_Lily_Flower_ Cucumber Sandwiches

10th August 2006:
I liked it, do you know when the next chappie will be up?

Author's Response: I actually have 8 chapters written, but it takes a while for them to be authorized or something, so I don't know when they will be up. In the meantime, I'll be working on the next few! Thanks for reviewing!

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Review #13, by holly bergman Eileen

29th July 2006:
Great story. You wrote Eileen's character very well. I'd like to see how you write Snape so please update soon. (I know updating has become a bit slow so I won't pester you). Good job!

Author's Response: Yes, updates do seem to be running rather slowly. I already have eight chapters written of this fanfiction, actually. I'll try to get them all posted by the end of this millenia. :) Thanks for reading!

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