That was a great start! keep it going, it'll be interesting to see where all the characters end up. but you might want to focus on just having the emotions of one character narrarted to the reader, its less complicated. Author's Response: i'm glad you liked the one chapter. The first chappie is always the hardest to write. Thanks for the review. Report Review
Hi this is a good story and makes a lot of sense why Cedric would want to be a champion try out and it makes sense why Cho always looks at Harry. Please continue! =)Author's Response: i'm glad you like the first chapter. thanks for the review Report Review
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