{reviewid: 2622672, reviewer: 'That%20randOm%20kid'}
30th November 2011:
Haha i pove how you ended the story :) well thats all. Oh and the story itself was good too.
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{reviewid: 2035810, reviewer: 'Ignotus_Peverell'}
18th January 2009:
Excellent. I really liked how you managed to get them together. It was very unrealistic but i loved it all the same.
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{reviewid: 2031292, reviewer: 'Lindsay'}
12th January 2009:
I know you're already done with the story, but my favorite quote was, “A boy? Who needs boys anyways? They’re all stupid gits with only one thing on their mind! No offence,” she added. Sirius was slightly taken aback to hear this first year girl thinking of such things.
“Er…only one thing on their mind?”
“Quidditch!” She answered angrily.
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{reviewid: 1833554, reviewer: 'kirstie'}
17th February 2008:
ohh i loved t. lol. it was heaps funny. im adding it to my favourites. though i think you wrote lily potter instead of lily evans and you spelt evans wrong!
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{reviewid: 1828590, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
12th February 2008:
I loved it! Alice is way cool! :7)
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{reviewid: 1828586, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
12th February 2008:
I love Susan! She's great! :7)
My favorite line was:
"Four brothers, Black. And I can outsmart every one of them.” He smiled and held out his hand.
“Welcome aboard. You can call me Sirius.”
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{reviewid: 1828572, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
12th February 2008:
I loved it! I can't wait to see what Sirius says when he finds out who his buddy is! :7)
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{reviewid: 1828566, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
12th February 2008:
AHH! I loved it! I think it's hilarious that Sirius got a girl. :7)
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{reviewid: 1816320, reviewer: 'Lillyflower13'}
2nd February 2008:
BRAVA ! ME LUV! YEAH!
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{reviewid: 1784774, reviewer: 'tanisha'}
9th January 2008:
a nice ending and i liked it.
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{reviewid: 1771949, reviewer: 'Draco1129'}
30th December 2007:
Hes been telling you that for years” Sirius pointed out and Peter turned around and got back to the essay he was writing. LOVED IT!! FAV QUOTE
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{reviewid: 1722509, reviewer: 'Missy'}
23rd November 2007:
At first I dint get what you meant by "because if it wasn’t for Alice’s impatience with Lily…Well, lets just say that there would still be one seriously evil wizard walking around with a bunch of horcruxes." But then I realized you were talking about Harry. 8/10
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{reviewid: 1646794, reviewer: 'smithygirl'}
28th September 2007:
cute to cute!
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{reviewid: 1632683, reviewer: 'Ppa'}
16th September 2007:
“Whatever. Do I look stupid to you, Remus? Huh? Huh? Huh? Do I? No, I do not,” she answered her own rhetorical question.
Alice, Alice, Alice. Such a characater!
10/10 ^_^
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{reviewid: 1632627, reviewer: 'Ppa'}
16th September 2007:
favorite quote- "You call that a handshake, do you?"
10/10! ^_^
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{reviewid: 1606860, reviewer: 'IS%20bookworm'}
31st August 2007:
OOH!!! Loved it! Awesome story! If you write a book you must tell us all immediately! :7) Keep writing!
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{reviewid: 1600702, reviewer: 'Charisma_tn'}
27th August 2007:
Yeah, this was a cute fic, but I get tired of all the fics that are about manipulating Lily and James. I don't think that's right. Also, I get tired of the whole - "everyone knew they liked each other except them" angle. I think it'd be funnier if people were surprised.
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{reviewid: 1600694, reviewer: 'Charisma_tn'}
27th August 2007:
That's really creepy that they're watching. They're lucky it worked out, but I think that's really unfair of them to manipulate Lily like that. She has the right to decide when she wants to act on her own feelings.
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{reviewid: 1566745, reviewer: 'IheartBookWorms617'}
10th August 2007:
yes you can dream.
hopefully you can get something on the shelves one day.
that would be awesome.
and i love the last sentence.
this whole story was glorious. lmao.
good job
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{reviewid: 1564236, reviewer: 'Kestral'}
9th August 2007:
"Tonsil Quidditch" - hilarious!
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{reviewid: 1562507, reviewer: 'Lol'}
8th August 2007:
You’re just jealous of my natural beauty and charisma because clearly you have none.”
hahaha LOVE IT
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{reviewid: 1552185, reviewer: 'Divine_Till_Night'}
3rd August 2007:
Love it! 10/10 ~Ginny~
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{reviewid: 1551547, reviewer: 'tickingclocks'}
3rd August 2007:
So...it's completed then? Cuz your status is still WIP. Nice story btw. Very cute :D
Author's Response: i changed it
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{reviewid: 1551545, reviewer: 'hjplover'}
3rd August 2007:
“What is it that your highness needs from me, a lowly commoner?” “She wants to give me a pedicure,” he told those around him.
“And a facial,” Remus added gleefully. Sirius sighed heavily. Yay!!! sirius got a facial! and a pedicure!
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{reviewid: 1551539, reviewer: 'hjplover'}
3rd August 2007:
He eyed her coy smile (who knew Lily could be coy?) this chapter isn't funny but it's cute!
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