I love Oliver wood! He is my man. My friends all think I'm crazy!
Lilly is exactly like me, bookworm, square glasses, beats the shit out of people.

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Hey! okay so after every chapter you sighn your name right? well guess what my name is Tiffany too and so is this other person's and another and almost all the stories i've read so far have a tiffany. Isn't that weird? It's like all the hp fans are tiffany's

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luved it wheres the rest eyy i wna no wer it is :( soo good xxx

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Very nice story, and quite interesting to see a story where Oliver is an awkward, love-struck teenager around here. Good on ya.

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panic at the disco??? come on you could at least pick a good band.other then your somewhat poor taste in music (dont take it personally) your story is pretty good.

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plz update soon I like this story a lot.
thx
xoxo

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so i totally loved that
it was cute
annnddd
much anticipated ^-^
10/10

Author's Response: It was cute? Thanks! It was a bit on the short side but I'm happy you enjoyed it. Once again, thank you for the high marks. :)

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so i'm sorry i haven't left comments so far
but i'm just that into this story ^-^
great job, i

Author's Response: Oh don't worry, a review is a review to me. I'm happy that you're that into it though. :)

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I've gotta say, this is my most favorite chapter so far. I like how Oliver is developing.

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I think you should have more description about the surroundings and stuff. Well, it was nice to know where the fight started.

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I was expecting a bit of a fight at the end, not Lilly accepting so quickly.

The other thing is, I think you should develop your characters more. If not all of them, then atleast just Oliver and Lilly.

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I think you gave too much description of Lilly. Or maybe it was just the way you wrote it. Let the reader discover some stuff about her on their own.

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ahahaha nice i wonder what else will happen on their date .. cant wait to see :D keep up the good work ..

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nice chapter ... eheh lved the way he asked her out and corny pick up lines galore oh man ...

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I wonder what happend ... nice chapter ... poor oliver he is so accident prone when shes around

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I really wonder what they have up their sleeves sounds interesting ... nice chapter and wow this alex kid is just as annoying as barbie maybe they should date :D

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oh snap she said no ... nice thats pretty cool ... now oliver make your move
nice chapter "D

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Ahhh nooo now we have another bump on the road , who ever this alex character is he better not do anything to lilly ... nice chapter poor oliver

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zis is very true mr oliver it has come to my attention that you are a screw up come on boy act like a man ... nice chapter :d

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awww Olliver is so cute :d nice chapter :d i liked how the tryouts went ahaha and why would her parents name her barbie ahahah so funny

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ahahah wow she ahs the same anger as Lily... nice chapter i wonder what willhappen at the tryouts

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ugh barbie is a cow she should not disturb dates like that awww i hope lilly and Ollie get over the rough patch

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AWww Olly you manly man you are me hero :D
nice chapter :D

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oh mr wood you have tonnes to do to catch the maid , nice chapter

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ahhaha interesting chapter :D aww i cant wait till the two get together :D

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