{reviewid: 2683235, reviewer: 'EnchantedGhost'}
9th April 2012:
I loved the first Chapter ^^ Can't wait for the next one ;)
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{reviewid: 1091709, reviewer: 'raven'}
4th August 2006:
i love your story please hurry up and up date please!!!!
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{reviewid: 1067761, reviewer: 'raven'}
18th July 2006:
i love your story i hope that you write the next chapter very soon!
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{reviewid: 1067760, reviewer: 'raven'}
18th July 2006:
i love your story i hope that you write the next chapter very soon!
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{reviewid: 1063410, reviewer: 'marauder%27s%20laughter'}
15th July 2006:
what???
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{reviewid: 1063184, reviewer: 'Madame_Puddifoot'}
15th July 2006:
This is such a good story! Great start...funny...hehehe.
Update soon, can't wait for the next chapter.
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{reviewid: 1062939, reviewer: 'Magical%20Reality'}
15th July 2006:
Not bad, unfortunately for us, your opening statement is painfully true. It is a rare pleasure to find a fic that has been written well and the plot not leaving me questioning what the writer was thinking. So far I like where this is going, and if I can offer some advice, make sure you take your time when writing. This chapter is fine but more often than not fics don't live up to their first chapter. #MR#
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{reviewid: 1062930, reviewer: 'Katie'}
15th July 2006:
i can't wait to know what happens next
wonderful first chapter
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{reviewid: 1062855, reviewer: 'BrighterThanSunshine'}
15th July 2006:
cute chapter! just kinda wish it wasn't in first person. but well done! Update soon please
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{reviewid: 1062596, reviewer: 'Lucky_Potion'}
14th July 2006:
It is a very good story. *adds to favorites* Will wait for an update.
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{reviewid: 1062585, reviewer: 'Draco_IS_mine'}
14th July 2006:
Oh this is good. I can't wait for then chapter!
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{reviewid: 1062410, reviewer: 'FalconFeathers'}
14th July 2006:
I REAllllllllyyyyyyyyyy Like it
keep it up
and type fast
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{reviewid: 1062404, reviewer: 'Marie'}
14th July 2006:
Oooooooh i like this soooo much!! It's great! James totally jealous of a MUGGLE? HA!!! Pureblood take that!:) although James is awfully sweet ofcourse it's just nice to tease.. i hope you're planning at least a couple of chapters with jealousy and not let Lily fall for him too fast cause that's just no fun. :) Anyway, keep up the great work and i hope you update VERY soon.
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{reviewid: 1062354, reviewer: 'xoxo_sirius_xoxo'}
14th July 2006:
aww thats really good..post more soon! i love it!
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{reviewid: 1062342, reviewer: 'bumperz'}
14th July 2006:
Really good, hope theres more soon
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