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Review #1, by patronus_charm Perfection is Over Rated

12th July 2014:

Ok, I had so many feels while reading this it was so insane. There were so many memories of Ronks while reading this as it felt as if he was having the same age old argument so I was like whoo Ronks then I remembered it wasn’t them but another pairing so it left me feeling all confused so I had that. Then there was Remus battling with him being both a wolf and a person and which part of him controlled him at that moment and that was shown really well with when he kissed Lily and how he finally realised that was himself. Then at the end with ‘Perfection is overrated’ was really good as it was all about self love and embracing yourself and I really loved this. Fab story!

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Review #2, by Andromedatonks Perfection is Over Rated

28th June 2007:
That was really an original interpretation of Remus-the-werewolf! Wow. I loved it, it is really well-written and emotional.
And love really bites.

Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And yes, yes it does...

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Review #3, by Belle_Rose Perfection is Over Rated

11th April 2007:
Poor dear...

But that was a different twist...


~ Leah

Author's Response: Well thank you. :D

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Review #4, by blackpearl_ Perfection is Over Rated

2nd April 2007:
Awww! I feel so bad for Remus and Lily both! Especially Remus... He's such a good person! He's willing to exchange his happiness in return for another's well-being... 10/10.

Author's Response: Aww, I know! Isn't he a sweetie? I love him...

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Review #5, by al3x Perfection is Over Rated

31st March 2007:
omg, tears! Uch, they arent falling, buh they're there! Oh so sad =[ Poor remus...

Author's Response: aww, thank you!

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Review #6, by StubbyBoardmanFan Perfection is Over Rated

23rd February 2007:
REALLY good. Wow. You could kick JKR's sorry butt with that story. I swear, you write Harry Potter stuff better than her. It's weird. And, you have some kind of gift for kick-ass story endings, too.

Author's Response: Blasphemy! LoL. That is an outstanding compliment and I thank you very much, I am extremely flattered. (I'll kindly disagree with you because I think JKR could run laps around me in writing, but still, it does make me feel good that you find my writing that lovely.) :D Thank you so much!

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Review #7, by wicKeDwitch1316 Perfection is Over Rated

22nd February 2007:
Wow, that was really good. Poor Remus. I'm usually not to fond of Lily/OC stories because it always makes me question how devoted Lily was to James, and that breaks my heart. There's a part of me that needs to believe in true love, and without Lily/James---it just isn't satisfied. Great job, and tastefully done as well!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D

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Review #8, by Unicorn Girl Perfection is Over Rated

4th February 2007:
I loved this was simply amazing.


Author's Response: thank you very much!

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Review #9, by Lily Lupin Perfection is Over Rated

23rd January 2007:
I think you have outdone yourself, that rocked, it was so sad and moving.
I love it as i love your other stories.
but maybe more so this time because I feel so utterly attached to that state of mind, wanting something you can't have,
but anyway I just wanted to let you know that you are my favorite fanfic author and that this story is one of your best

I hear that when someone goes through an emotional time, they write even better than usual.this definitely worked for you, but then again you always write well, maybe you were just inspired
10/10 as always

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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Review #10, by loca lolita Perfection is Over Rated

23rd December 2006:
That was brilliant. Geesh, sad much? btw, who did you use for Remus on the banner?

Author's Response: Thank you, and I used Kevin Zegers. ;)

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Review #11, by jez redfern Perfection is Over Rated

22nd December 2006:
kinda sad

Author's Response: i know. ;)

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Review #12, by SharleenNaidu Perfection is Over Rated

15th October 2006:
This is really good. Well done


Author's Response: thank you. ;)

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Review #13, by liandhate Perfection is Over Rated

12th September 2006:
aaaaawwwwww. thats so sad. you should write a sequel. 10/10. it was perfect (no punn intended), but not in an overrated way, in a simple way.

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! {lack of perfection and all. lol} And we'll see. If I don't write a sequal, you can bet I'll be writing plenty more Lily/Remus one shots for you. {sad and everything. ;)}

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Review #14, by Pitys_Grace Perfection is Over Rated

16th August 2006:
Its good. Not exactly what i epected but i like the idea. keep writing


Author's Response: Thank you. :)

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Review #15, by Nagini_Strikes_Again Perfection is Over Rated

1st August 2006:
You didn't quite specify the setting/time in the beggining of your story. It was only until the last moments when we were told that this all took place in the Room of Requirement. With a bit more imagery, details you could improve. Nonetheless, it was a good one-shot. I ... *gag* thought it was *chokes* sweet. *HISS!!!* >>....yyyyyeah -_- well, you could still improve, so...don't take it lightly

Author's Response: well thank you, but I didn't want anyone to know they were in the Room of Requirement until the end. ;) Dunno why, I just like to let you wonder...:) I'm glad you liked it though, and there's always room for improvement in everything! ;)

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Review #16, by LookingThroughTheEyeGlass Perfection is Over Rated

19th July 2006:
T.T I'm like.. So.. SADDDDDD! I feel so bad to poor Remus, I like the way you've created the wolf within him.

Such a sweet couple Remus and Lily are, except... Shes James' T.T what a messed up world.

Perfection is overrated. (

Author's Response: Amen. Who wants perfection? It would make life much too boring!

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Review #17, by mrs_heather_grint Perfection is Over Rated

18th July 2006:
aww... poor remus :[. good job :].

Author's Response: thank you very much!

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Review #18, by hpOracle Perfection is Over Rated

18th July 2006:
I loved it... and I'm really sorry that you broke up with your boyfriend... I understand your thoughts though, love definately sucks! haha... Truthfully... great way to release some of the emotion though through writing... great job =)

Author's Response: very confusing. It both rocks and sucks. The question of love really is, is if love is worth so much emotional turmoil? I think...I think it just might be. ;)

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Review #19, by imperfectionist Perfection is Over Rated

18th July 2006:
that was...odd...twas good though...poor Remus...

Author's Response: yes, always poor Remus. I am rather in love with Remus though so :-P to Lily.

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Review #20, by _xSolenneBijou Perfection is Over Rated

18th July 2006:
Breakups are good for writing... the emotions put into a story are amazing. Like this fic. I could like, literally feel everything that was happening between Lily and Remus. It was great; I loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it!

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