That was really an original interpretation of Remus-the-werewolf! Wow. I loved it, it is really well-written and emotional. And love really bites.Author's Response: Aww, thank you! And yes, yes it does... Report Review
Poor dear... But that was a different twist... 10/10 ~ LeahAuthor's Response: Well thank you. :D Report Review
Awww! I feel so bad for Remus and Lily both! Especially Remus... He's such a good person! He's willing to exchange his happiness in return for another's well-being... 10/10.Author's Response: Aww, I know! Isn't he a sweetie? I love him... Report Review
omg, tears! Uch, they arent falling, buh they're there! Oh so sad =[ Poor remus...Author's Response: aww, thank you! Report Review
REALLY good. Wow. You could kick JKR's sorry butt with that story. I swear, you write Harry Potter stuff better than her. It's weird. And, you have some kind of gift for kick-ass story endings, too.Author's Response: Blasphemy! LoL. That is an outstanding compliment and I thank you very much, I am extremely flattered. (I'll kindly disagree with you because I think JKR could run laps around me in writing, but still, it does make me feel good that you find my writing that lovely.) :D Thank you so much! Report Review
Wow, that was really good. Poor Remus. I'm usually not to fond of Lily/OC stories because it always makes me question how devoted Lily was to James, and that breaks my heart. There's a part of me that needs to believe in true love, and without Lily/James---it just isn't satisfied. Great job, and tastefully done as well!Author's Response: Thank you! :D Report Review
I loved this story...it was simply amazing. 10/10Author's Response: thank you very much! Report Review
I think you have outdone yourself, that rocked, it was so sad and yet.so moving. I love it as i love your other stories. but maybe more so this time because I feel so utterly attached to that state of mind, wanting something you can't have, but anyway I just wanted to let you know that you are my favorite fanfic author and that this story is one of your best I hear that when someone goes through an emotional time, they write even better than usual.this definitely worked for you, but then again you always write well, maybe you were just inspired 10/10 as alwaysAuthor's Response: thank you so much! Report Review
That was brilliant. Geesh, sad much? btw, who did you use for Remus on the banner?Author's Response: Thank you, and I used Kevin Zegers. ;) Report Review
kinda sadAuthor's Response: i know. ;) Report Review
This is really good. Well done :DAuthor's Response: thank you. ;) Report Review
aaaaawwwwww. thats so sad. you should write a sequel. 10/10. it was perfect (no punn intended), but not in an overrated way, in a simple way. lurves, li ;) Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! {lack of perfection and all. lol} And we'll see. If I don't write a sequal, you can bet I'll be writing plenty more Lily/Remus one shots for you. {sad and everything. ;)} Report Review
Its good. Not exactly what i epected but i like the idea. keep writing Pitys_GraceAuthor's Response: Thank you. :) Report Review
You didn't quite specify the setting/time in the beggining of your story. It was only until the last moments when we were told that this all took place in the Room of Requirement. With a bit more imagery, details you could improve. Nonetheless, it was a good one-shot. I ... *gag* thought it was *chokes* sweet. *HISS!!!* >>....yyyyyeah -_- well, you could still improve, so...don't take it lightly Author's Response: well thank you, but I didn't want anyone to know they were in the Room of Requirement until the end. ;) Dunno why, I just like to let you wonder...:) I'm glad you liked it though, and there's always room for improvement in everything! ;) Report Review
T.T I'm like.. So.. SADDDDDD! I feel so bad to poor Remus, I like the way you've created the wolf within him. Such a sweet couple Remus and Lily are, except... Shes James' T.T what a messed up world. Perfection is overrated. (Author's Response: Amen. Who wants perfection? It would make life much too boring! Report Review
aww... poor remus :[. good job :].Author's Response: thank you very much! Report Review
I loved it... and I'm really sorry that you broke up with your boyfriend... I understand your thoughts though, love definately sucks! haha... Truthfully... great way to release some of the emotion though through writing... great job =)Author's Response: Love...is very confusing. It both rocks and sucks. The question of love really is, is if love is worth so much emotional turmoil? I think...I think it just might be. ;) Report Review
that was...odd...twas good though...poor Remus...Author's Response: yes, always poor Remus. I am rather in love with Remus though so :-P to Lily. Report Review
Breakups are good for writing... the emotions put into a story are amazing. Like this fic. I could like, literally feel everything that was happening between Lily and Remus. It was great; I loved it.Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it! Report Review
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