wow, that was wonderful! Extremely well-written and the characters are well-defined. Love it. :ODAuthor's Response: Thank you; I'm going to be working on the actual basis of this story soon, I believe. Thanks for the review - again! Report Review
Wow...amazing prolouge =] I love your use of descriptions
I can tell this is going to be a great story
Update soon!Author's Response: But of course, dear. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
That was really good! I can't wait for you to update this!
10/10Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I'll be updating soon! Report Review
Wow - this is amazingly well written! I'm surprised there aren't more reviews for it ... where the hell are people?
Totally saving it to favourites. Magnificent!!
-Penny.Author's Response: Aww, thanks a ton, Penny! I'm glad you enjoyed it that much, and I'm pleased to say I'll be working on this one soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
I don't understand why this story doesn't have more reviews... because honestly... this is the best first chapter I have read of a marauder story... you have a really good premise... and I am really looking forward to reading the rest of this story... don't let the lack of reviews get you down... keep writing, and people will respond to that =) I garentee it... if anyone is reading this who has read this story, you really should review because this story deserves it... sorry about that... but yes it needed to be said... also you should reply to your reviews... brings more readers/reviewers in because they know that you appreciate the time they have taken to review instead of flying off to another fic... just a few little things... if you already do that ignore that and concentrate on the fact that I adore this fic... hehe this story is now in my favourites and I will see when you update so hop to it =) Report Review
I love it... please continue as soon as possible =) Author's Response: Will do; thanks for reading and reviewing! Report Review
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