Ah more darkness, more angst...both of which I love!! Another well written one-shot, you showed some nice aspects of Draco & there were some lovely description in there too plus I did like the line about Snape...I think that summed him up rather well !! Second last paragraph was very nicely written !
~Lai.Author's Response: I figured you would like this was too. Even though this one was earlier in my writing career I believe it is still one of my better ones as far as writing style goes. I'm quite proud of the way that I (hopefully) managed to portray Draco in a good light and on the good side AND be a Dramione while still staying away from the cliches. I'm glad you liked it so much. Thank you for you feedback! Report Review
I'm good? You're good. Okay, there was some grammar stuff, some missing "d"s and commas, but we all have our typos. Otherwise, very good! I always love the dimensions to Draco and this was the typical, but still well done, spin on his relationship with his parents. B-e-a-utiful. I hope Draco will go to the light side in the last book. *fingers crossed* But, anyway, great job! Author's Response: Yeah sorry. The computer I type my stories up on has issues with the "d" key for some reason. I figured I was missing some commas. Sometime I'll try to fix that. I'm glad you liked the relationship with his parents. I have no idea where it came from. I actually have no idea where any of this story came from. It was kinda just a spur of the moment thing so I'm very glad you liked it. Report Review
two words.so confused.it was good though, despite the fact that i didn't understand itAuthor's Response: It was meant to be confusing and unclear at the end. Glad you liked it! Report Review
wow that was amazing and beautiful, it was so well written...it makes my day to read fics like this that are just so good!!! I wonder who it was...i was thinking voldemort but then the voice said "even the adrk lord himslef..." so it couldnt have been him ummm i dunno who else it could be... :|
anywayz great story!! (adds to faves)Author's Response: that's a good theory, I like knowing what people are thinking about my writing. Nice to know it made you wonder. Glad to know it's good enough for you favs. Thanks for the review Report Review
OMG sorry. I ABSOLUTELY loved this! It was brilliantly written.
It was really emotional and you really felt for Draco.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I have no idea why I wrote it cuz, like I've said I don't really think that what I wrote would happen but I got such a wonderful plot bunny and I wrote the first draft of that in about 2 hours or so maybe. I'm glad you liked it, I'm personally pretty happy with it myself. Report Review
Thanks!! OMG yes I LOVE Remus!! He's my total favorite. :)
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HermioneAnne (jeni)Author's Response: wrong story I believe Report Review
Haha... A Dramione. Well done.. But you killed her.. *Sob quietly*...
It's nice, but who's mystory killing person... Can I figure out by reading it again or is it guess work?
Well done... 9/10Author's Response: In my opinion, that is the only way an actual semi-realistic Dramione could occur. I'm very interested to know who YOU think the murderer is. If you have any ideas you can contact me somehow and tell me what you think. Report Review
Beautifully written, and so sad, hope you write more with Dramione involved :) Author's Response: I'm not usually into the whole Dramione thing, but I might write more. *shrug* I dunno. If a plot bunny or challange comes to me, I'll write it. Report Review
LOL, Dramione!! I really liked your storyAuthor's Response: thank you. I thought it was very sad, but I meant for it to be. I also tried to make it powerful and thought provocative. Report Review
Wow. The ending was brilliant. I really liked this one-shot. It was so different...Author's Response: I'm assuming different is a complement. I really like the end as well, very sad, and surprising. Report Review
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