this was really good, i love your character! Report Review
Kind of confusing, but good as a whole.Author's Response: Sorry xD I tend to confuse. Glad you liked it, however. Report Review
I really enjoyed this, the ending was fantastic. Natalie is a very interesting character. Lovely job. Author's Response: Thanks very much! Natalie is so close to me... :) It seems like she's real. And then she shouts insults at me... :D Anyways, thank you! Report Review
tonks lupin eh??
Nymphadora Lupin sounds so much better, but this IS tonks we're talking about
great story by the way! *10/10*Author's Response: Thanks!!
Lol, the name iffy-ness... I know the feeling. But, taking Tonks into view, I highly doubt she'd introduce herself as Tonks Lupin. Probably just Tonks. Report Review
A little confusing, but I felt fulled into the story. Keep writing and update this fic soon! :)Author's Response: Thanks! But it is a one shot. Report Review
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