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Reading Reviews for Once in a Lifetime
  
7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by marshmallow Once in a Lifetime

27th June 2007:
What happens after that? I like the idea, but the ending isn't satisfying and the part about what happens at Hogwarts doesn't really have to do with the fact that they love each other.

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Review #2, by Who do you think this could possibly be?? Once in a Lifetime

28th July 2006:
Well, its a mystery to me too. Anyway, I just wanted to say that your story needs some improvment, a lot of improvment, but I'm pretty sure I've let you know this plenty of times, there was something else, but I forgot, so ill tell you later if need be.....K, bye. Oh, and remember, improvment, lots of it too. Tee hee. One more thing, if your friend bet you, then you definatly lost, no kidding. lol. bye jordan....

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Review #3, by HarryPotterRoxMySox711 Once in a Lifetime

28th July 2006:
Ok, buddy, u r a jerk. Lol, jkjk, actually, u r, but what can i do about it? Absolutely nothing. And fyi, Hot_Hermione's story (who happens to be one of my best friends) rox everyone's sox, and u know it! Ur just jealous cuz she can write a story better than u, way better. lol. Ok, i just really felt i needed to clear that up. Anyhoo, ur 1st paragragh is absolutely amazing, i love it! But the rest of the story.......yea, horrible, well, not completly, but u know. U should add more to it and make it better. But, knowing u, u r waaaayyyy too lazy to ever do something like that. Oh, and i think u should read my story and review it, but still, ur waaaayyyy too lazy to ever do anything close to that, so w/e. Well, bye.

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Review #4, by Hot_Hermione Once in a Lifetime

23rd July 2006:
omg jordan that was so stupid. i mean ur 1st paragraph was totally good but the rest sucked. i am so telling ur gf sontasia about ur wierd hp fettish.

Author's Response: who the hell are you


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Review #5, by WeasleyandGranger Once in a Lifetime

16th July 2006:
Awww how cute!! It was a little bit short but very cute!!

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Review #6, by WeasleyandGranger Once in a Lifetime

16th July 2006:
Awww how cute!! It was a little bit short but very cute!!

Author's Response: thanks my friend bet me that i couldnt write a story that was good so i just made it short and sweet

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Review #7, by alp Once in a Lifetime

12th July 2006:
a clever little piece. Though if you get them into some mysterious room, ou could maybe give some more things to say or do with one another.Bplus

Author's Response: thanks for the review. I'll try your suggestion

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