Yes I am reviewing myself, its a good story one that I have been working on a long time now, please review when you read it even just two words is fine!

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wait why did he do that? he wants her to hurt for awhile an then will forgive her?

Author's Response: He wants it to be more of a surprise...he's a clueless boy...he thinks its a good thing to do and then she will never expect it and be relieved!

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oh dear, a happy ending would be nice, but anyway, i can't wait to read the rest of this!

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oh dear. it might just be smart for james to just cancel the practise so his friend doesn't get killed!

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oh dear, well that is sure to make Eilidh extremely mad at Sirius, im sure that sirius is going to be upset.

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o sirius has a date with her! oh dear, how is lily going to take james giving up on her?

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aww cute! the part about the wizard of oz was a hilarious part to put into the story!

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hmm, detentions together might actually help. can't wait to see if it does help!

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i think sirius is going to lose the bet because already two of the days have passed and she still doesn't like him!

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ooo this looks so good! i've read some stories with sort of the same idea, but this one looks excellent!

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awww c'mon!!! take mercy on ur faithful reviewers and post!!! and unless uv figured out a way 2 only give it 2 those who review, i guess the others can see it 2 *large fake sigh*... well, i suppose if siri tells her taht he loves her it cant b 2 bad 2 wait 4... (altho u did say it wouldnt b happy ending) but really, happy endings r misleading... some1s ALWAYS unhappy, u no? ok im just a little off track ,so 10/10!!!

Author's Response: Its been ages I am aware, I have finally updated and I am just waiting for validation and there will still not be a happy ending! Thanks for faithful reviews, I plan to make a comeback!

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well... not quite how i expected her 2 find out, but deff less cliche!!! but i suppose its better also 2 hear him say that he didnt want 2 do it than just hear about it in general... but shes still not happy (understandable) and- wow understandable's a big word!!! *does little 'hem, hem' like umbridge (the old evil bat)* ignoring that ODD (or u could say ADD hahehee) comment... 10/10 as always!!!

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o ok. i can help u with the funniness thing, i think.. c i always get funny stuff by not really tryin 2 b funny or by readin stuff under the 'humor' category, which usually works 2... but traditionally, im not funny, just CRAZY!!! so thats most of the humor i would have... o and if u read My Marauder by Cadyn Black, ull get sume good funny stuff i think. back 2 UR stry, 10/10!!!

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interesting. . . .I cannot wait for the rest of it!

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no, it was funny! i love how she made the food run away from sirius, that was the best because everyone knows how much sirius loves food! :D

Author's Response: Thank you!!

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I am this *pauses to place thumb and forefinger less than a centimeter apart* close to kicking Sirius from here to China and back! How could he make her cry like that?! If he really loved her he wouldn't make her so upset! Ah well, men are weird like that I suppose. I don't think we were ever ment to understand them, nor them understand us. And maybe it's better that way.

Again, great chappie! I loved it!! Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm just happy I finally updated and got back into it a bit, you know!! I'll doi my best to update when I can, I don't have much time coz I now have a job!!
Katyx

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Marvelous!
I can't wait to read more.

15/10

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Fabulous chapter.

10/10

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Marvelous!
Definitly marvelous!

10/10

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Fabulous!

10/10

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Absolutly marverlous!
With each chapter I want to read more.
You are doing a truly excellent job.

10/10

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That was absolutly adorable.
Must most definitly read more and more and more.

10/10

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Marvelous chapter and I found out the pronouncation for "Eilidh".

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I simply loved this chapter.
The only thing I am having trouble with is how do you pronounce "Eilidh"?


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Marvelous beginning!
I am loving it already.
Now I do believe there is more to read.

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