Ok that was not ur normal everyday story. Something out of the ordinary but really well written. I think it was a great thing u did going out on ur own and writing somehing diffrent.

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interesting, whats next?

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Okay, um... That was short.. Add more detail, it'll be appealing, and we may understand what happening more.

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this is a wierd and wonderful fic, i have never thought of harry and ron together but i found this oddly intertaining
well done cant wait for the next chapter

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First of all, in the first paragraph. I think you meant anymore, not anyone(sorry! I know its not that big of a mistake, but I'm kind of a perfectionist.) Well I'm gonna be honest, but please do not get mad cuss this is good honest. Usually, I don't read slash fanfiction, and I know that you said that if you don't like slash then don't even bother reading or reviewing. But I thought 'I'll read it anyway. Just give it a shot.' So I read it. And I actually liked it(Even thought it' only one chapter.) I still like it and I am looking forward to reading this story more and liking it when you add a new chapter. Please continue this story.

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this story is very romantic,and it has lots of scenes when harry acts kind of GAY!But the story was still very good, my favorite part was when hermine kissed ron.

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Hmmm this is shaping up 2 b interesting... write more! Although i thought ur chapter was waaaaaaaay 2 short

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Huh. Well, I've never read a Slash fanfic before, and it was simply out of morbid curiosity that I read yours. Well written, I'll give that to you, but I find it a strange take on the HP series to make Harry gay and want his best friend. Good luck.

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You said if you don't like slash fanfics don't review, well I don't like them, but I'm going to review, and no it's not gonna be a flame. It's pretty well written. But a little spontaneous, don't ya think? 8/10. :]. Nice job writing it even though it isn't my type of story.

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