I really liked this story! My friend and I think that you should become a professional poet! Keep up the good work!Author's Response: Wow thanks! That's my goal actually, but unfortunately there is so little market for it. Report Review
I adore this story! It isn't mushy romance, it is real! The way you wrote just flowed easily, but it still had a sense of mystery to it! Draco and Hermione in a possibly realistic scenario.Author's Response: Good! I'm glad you think so! That's what I was aiming for! Report Review
It was one interesting story :) I really liked Draco's character in your story and also the way you explained things to us :) keep writing more, I really do enjoy reading them :D 10/10Author's Response: Hey, thank you for your kind review. It's always appreciated. Report Review
AWESOME story your a great
funny little thing just happened
so i was looking for some dramiones to read and i opened up four stories and i wanted to see the authors so i looked at this one and read your name then i looked at the next one i read your name again and then i looked at the other two they also had your name
i love this story i give it a 10/10
xoxo emo_in_yellow_angel_in_blackAuthor's Response: Hahahaha. Nice. I'm so glad that you liked it! Report Review
awww sooo cute. :D
good one shot too.Author's Response: You're the bestest! Report Review
AaWwWwWwW, that was SoOoOoOoOo SWEET!!! Is there a sequal? Totaly a 10/10!!!
~*jenni*~Author's Response: Ooooh, thank you darling! Sorry, no sequal. But your review is appreciated. Report Review
omigosh i loved that
it really rockedAuthor's Response: Yay! :0 Report Review
Great story! I like how they get together er, closer at the end. How did he see her poem? Sneaky!Author's Response: Heehee. Sneaky is who I am. Report Review
Wow. Great story, I loved it. I thought you captured the personality of both the characters pretty good, and unlike most Draco/Hermione stories I have read, they weren't completly OOC.
Anyway, fantastic job. I absolutly loved it. 10/10Author's Response: Merci boucoup. I'm very glad you took the tiem to read it. I wuv you. Report Review
I love it. And I love the poem. It's a little to rhymy flowy for my tastes but it totally sums up Draco. And i like cuz i can relate to it. Cuz there's a part of everybody that they don't show to the world.Author's Response: Thank you veryyyyyyyyyy muchhhhyyyy. Report Review
I really loved to poem, it really matches Draco Malfoy's personality (you also let him say that, and it's true ^^). I liked the story, it's just perfect. It doesn't bother me that you didn't let Draco tell what happened that summer, it just made it very mysterious, and that's how I like it. Keep up the good writing, as always ;) Love, Kirsten xAuthor's Response: You just keep giving out wonderful reviews, and for that, I thank you! Report Review
another review i open with a genuine "aw!" that was so cute, and holy smokes that poem was sooo creative! imaginative! and so hermione-ish! really good!Author's Response: Wow! Thanks alot! You're sweetastic! Report Review
That's an amazing story! Kinda cute too. Well done! And i like the way it's written - it flows really well.Author's Response: Very mucho thanks! Report Review
3 Down....... That was god you really captivated Hermione's Virgo side here... as a virgo myself, I know what they are like and you really did well i loved this line ~ Draco Malfoy was the perfect person to analyze~ THAT is a very virgoan trait, analyzing people.. and situation....... BEAUTIFUL JOB!!!!!! **claps hands** Loved it.. thats another Fav lister... :p Well i still have more to read so i best be off, Later :pAuthor's Response: Yay! Another one you liked! I am so happy! Report Review
"He instead acted like a gentleman, carrying on conversations, holding the door open for me, and studying with me in the library." Oh God, I hope that will happen in the seventh book.
And your poem is WOW. You're good at it.
I loved this story.
P.S. Will you PLS read my fic. Hope you'll like itAuthor's Response: Awww I know, I wish that would happen too! And thanks about the poem, I write them in my spare time. I'll definitely check out your story too! Report Review
i loved it, i thought it was absolutely adorable!!
please, PLEASE make a sequal. I think we all deserve to know
what has happened to Draco over the summer!!!!
great job, you are one brilliant writer! =]
-Addison TaylorAuthor's Response: Hahaha! This review made me smile! Hmm, I don't know though, don't you think the imagination is better? Anyways, I'm out of plot bunnies for that, but maybe I'll come back to it later! Report Review
very interesting! i hope you keep writing cause i want to know what happens!Author's Response: Oohhh, I really wish I could keep writing, but all the plot bunnies fled from my mind! I promise I'll try though! Report Review
i have just read three of your one-shots and they are all amazing. You are a fantastic writer! Brilliant!
However, i don't know if this one can truely remain a one-shot ... i see a great short story beginning here!Author's Response: hahaha! I'm so glad you like my writing, that means a lot to me! And yes, I know, I should probabaly make a sequal, but I have no ideas! :( Thanks for reveiwing! Report Review
coolAuthor's Response: Sweet Report Review
really good !!Author's Response: Wahoo! Report Review
I thought this story was intruiging. I never thought it would go that way... maybe, just maybe thought, something will happen. I wonder what happens next, would you be willing to write another story and tell us? I would really like that! You have such a good style, I complement you on how well you write. Good Job! -Siss:)Author's Response: Aww thanks! Hmm, a sequal? Not exactly my style, but maybe I'll think about it! Anyways, thank you so much for your wonderous review! It made me really happy! Report Review
I really liked it.It was nice.Good poem 2.good short story.i liked the ending.very niceAuthor's Response: Oh! Thanks so much! Report Review
Excellent! 10/10 Honestly!Author's Response: Awww thanks! That is so sweet of you! Report Review
nice poem!!Author's Response: Wahoo thanks! Report Review
now that's class.
the whole poem and all.
i luved it.
ROC ON!! :DAuthor's Response: Oh yes, I've got class! Beat that! Thank you so much for this review! It made me happy! Report Review
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