Love it! Love it! Author's Response: yey. glad u did. i love it too. thank you!! keep reading x x Report Review
Hey! This is your newly appointed beta *bows to cheering crowds* , just taking a look at what goes on in the story before the chappie you PMed me. I love it! It is really intreging! I did, however find one mistake, a simple on really, and it is as listed:
more trouble than you could even dream of boy.”
more trouble than you could even dream of, boy." (just forgot a comma, no biggie)
Otherwise awesome job! I love it!Author's Response: awww thnk you! jst put up the next chapter n off to write some more!!
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Wow, amazing beginning. I want to know what happens next!! You have to update soon!!! 10/10 btwAuthor's Response: aw thank you! updates coming soon as well as a few other pieces! thanks so much for the review! x x Report Review
nice nice!!! i want more!!!! this is amazing!!!! PLEASE MORE!!!!!!!
MELAuthor's Response: oh thank you so much! ill put up the next chapter soon actually because i love it even if it hasn't got many reviews! *sniff* ah wel, onwards eh? thank you for your review!! x x Report Review
hey i think this is a really good start to your story. im new to the site so i havnt got an account yet but i will soon n then i will add this to my favourites!! hope it keeps going! x xAuthor's Response: thanks for the review! i will continue! lol x x Report Review
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