I liked how you switched from telling it from Padfoot to Prongs' point of view and showing that even in tense situations, friends can still have fun. It is hard to show funny moments in such a dark topic of Good vs. Evil but people still do, so to that I thank you and loved the story.

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Lol!! That was such a cute little snippet of James and Sirius's life. I loved it. It is exactly how i imagined then to act. But I did notice a lot of spelling and rammer errors. The ending was funny. It is a bit confusing when you change PoVs, so I would suggest putting a divider of sorts when you change it. 7/10

Author's Response: thank you for your nice review. I'm aware that I have a lot A LOT of mistakes there, and as soon as I get a beta reader, It will be changed. thanks for great advise! :D

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THIS STORY MADE ME SMILE!!!!lol it was really good!!!!

Author's Response: THANK YOU SO MUCH! I'm so happy you thought it is good. Thanks for both your reviews! :D

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hehe.. "Smile!"
great story!

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Hahaha, that was great ; D

Author's Response: Thanks! I hope I'll soon be up with a new one...!

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A different story. Entertaining to read. I like it though. Good job.

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hahaha... I like that. Well done 10/10

Author's Response: Thank you very much! That was very kind of you!

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*giggles* very funny and sweet. I like it very much. well done. :)

Author's Response: Thank you, manya! I'm very glad you liked it!

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that was excellent i love padfoot and prongs storys keep writing ....................oh by the way i give u 10/10yayayayayayayayayayay hehehehehehhhhehehehehehehehehehehehe

Author's Response: THANK YOU! 10/10. wow. That's like the biggest compliment I've ever recieved! Unbelievable nice of you.
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