please update soon Report Review
You know the story is nice and the plot is interesting but you lose the plot in somewhere, I guess. The old Sirius has no act or even a little thought in the recent chapters. Report Review
merry christmas Report Review
WOW!!! awsome story. Its weird kinda. but nice. btw whats remus's other form?? u didnt mention that. umm can u do more with that?
Ew somebody actually kissed snivilus! GROSSS! but good story. Report Review
“Have you ever wondered why Charlene switched here in the middle of third year?” Lily asked.
That would mean she's 13, right? Why would a 13 year old go clubbing? Author's Response: First, it's my story, I can do whatever I want, second, she could have been fourteen already, and third, Yes, fourteen year olds have ben clubbing before. Get over it. Especcailly if your fourteen and look a lot older. Report Review
really good chapter
"Well, first is Breakfast, that’s the most important. Then is post- Breakfast snack, then Pre-Lunch snack, then Lunch, then Pre-dinner snack, Dinner, Post-Dinner Snack, and finally Midnight Snack, all in chronological order."
What a joke!!
really good chapter again.Author's Response: Thank you, and By the way, Those are my meals of the day. I really works out for me. I'm only like 105 still. =)
Kat Report Review
bowchickawowwow!Author's Response: Lol, I don't really know what that is, but it sounds pretty funny. =) Report Review
i love this story it is sooooooooooooooooo amazing Report Review
oh damn what a cliffhanger. Okay f=definitely cant wait til the next one. i only just found this story and I read all seven chapters. Very good in my opinion. i like how sirius is watching all this and regretting some things. I want to hurt alex. Oh and who is the guy on your banner pic? Thats a really good image for a sirius I have to know :) Poor sirius having to watch charlene and alex interact . tsk tsk tsk cant wait til your next updateAuthor's Response: Meh, I have no idea who that dude (aka Sirius) is, but I know it took me about three hours to find sometihng that fit him. I kind of imagined him with longer hair, like shaggier, but that's what I imagined his face To look like. So, just look up cute guys on google, and you get this pic of this guy with no shirt, and you center in on his head and shoulders (Hey! That's a Shampoo!) and 'Voile'! Instant Sirius-With-A-haircut!
-Your Rambling Author,
Kat Report Review
oh no.Author's Response: Oh Yes. Report Review
Charlie's tricky.Author's Response: yes she is. Yes she is. =) Report Review
Heyy, Kat here, how did you like it? I know I made them beat Ravenclaw pretty bad, but I'm preparing for sometihng to happen a little later in the story. If you're wondering why The Old Sirius is gone, don't, because I've more just switched into story mode until something extremely important happens. I'm not bothering to put in Sirius's comments, because they would just interupt the story and the plot. Report Review
ohmigod. i love this story!! you are an awesome writer, please continue~ and fast! haha well this chappie was awesome. YOU ROCK! Report Review
great story Report Review
Ok I am this stories official fangirl! I can't believe I haven't already read this. This story is so good and descriptive! Oooh I hate Alex already! Anyways update soon!Author's Response: You're going to hate him a lot more, but this story takes place mostly in seventh year. Trust Me, you're going to be hating pretty much everyone but, I'm sorry to say it, regulus black pretty soon. How sad is that? Report Review
YO, Katthleen here, but my friends call me katie and my even closer friends call me kat. Hope you like it, although it was kinda short. See, the real sorty actually 'happens' in seventh year, so a few months go by after this dance. it's like , 'Bluh' and it's april or something
get it? i dont' actually. =)
So, how did everyone like it? This is actually chapter four (Lying Loyalties) and Chapter Five (I can't remember what is was supposed to be called) Report Review
hmm....interesting story...i like it^^ Report Review
Hii!!! If you didn't read the summary, which is my little Authour's note, then I'll tell you here.
I can't bring back Lily and James, because If I did, then why would Sirius need to come back in the first place? See the Paradox here?
Now, Dumbledore will explain either this coming chapter or the next, all of you know by now that he definately has a time turner.
I think that is you are wearing one, you are not affected by changes when people travel back, do you get it?
Your Loving Author,
Kat Report Review
Wow - it is really interesting. Your view of the afterlife. I wonder who those 'voices' were. Anyway, can't wait to read more, so please update soon!!!Author's Response: My view on the voices is that they represent temptation. The veil is the veil of death, and the reason you are condemned is because of the temtaion of the devil. Report Review
I love it! It's really interesting and seeing as I am in complete denial (I know, STILL) that Sirius is dead, it's perfect. *grins and tilts head in an almost scary fashion* I like to see what others think about what happened when he fell through the veil. I can't wait for more so update really soon! cheers! Kiss Kiss ^_^ EMBRACE THE FREAKDOM!!! Report Review
well this seems to be and is going to be a intersting story! i was wandering are you going to change the fates of james and lily aswell or not? anyway great chapter and well written! 8/10 =) Report Review
Wow, I'm excited! This is really good so far and I can't wait to see what's going to happen and how Sirius will change the lives of his friends and such. How much chaos will he cause. Oh boy- RETHINK MAGICAL MYSTERY VOICES! RETHINK!
Well, no, I guess it's for the best then. If it keeps the Potters alive... hopefully *glares and author*.
Once again, it's really lovely and I can't wait for the next chapter to come out soon!
-Erin (LostforWords)Author's Response: Sorry, I can't bring James and Lily Back (Major Paradox) why would Sirius have to go back in the first place. Then the whole universe would be destroyed, and we wouldn't want that now would we? =)
Praying for your forgiveness,
Kat Report Review
OMG! its sooo good! YAY! i hope the next chapters are as good as this one.... it was AMAZING! PLZ update soon... i wanna kno what happens!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Report Review
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