okayyy so ron and everybody's dead and harry and hermione are sad and so they make love to make for each others sadness? idget it plz explain Report Review
Okay that was really good but really fast i would like you to write more on this story though it was a great story idea. Report Review
just wanted to say that i like this story.
it is indeed rather bleak, but it's beautiful.
well done! Report Review
Brilliant absolutely brilliant. I genuinely loved the whole storyline and the way you wrote it. I am now going to read What the Heart wants and I am hoping it is as good as this. I give you a ten! Report Review
That was a wonderfull one-shot. I don't what you mean when you say that you think it is bleak. I think it is one of the best stories that I have read that is able to convey the heavy emotions that are set in the situation. Great job.
-Kat Report Review
So nice...it was just so amazing...the power of the words and the internal battle of both of them. It was awesome! Report Review
Very good story. Report Review
Wow...that was a really sad but really good story! loved how the emotions were so real!! please write more stories! Report Review
that was very interisting i liked it but it was strange Report Review
damn good story! Report Review
Basically. this was awesome. truthfully, one of the best one-shots i've read in in a long time. Mainly its so good because the emotions are so real!! so many one shots are fluff and smutty, and happily ever after...really predictable. But this, its anything but happily ever after and its anything but predictable. its two people in love, but not because they want to be, because they have to be...the desperation and the guilt, the pain make the story so real, and heartwrenching. Well done. Report Review
omg that is so sad... Report Review
u made me almost cry by the last line !
damn cool shot u have hit !
10/10 my friend for such a wonderful display of emotions.
why dont u continue this story into a short-story or a novella or a novel!
it really can turn out to be a good post-hogwarts story !
best of luck in ur life my friend :D ! Report Review
Oh that was dark but they lost everyone so it's understandable
Good one-shot:) Report Review
Nice! It keeps with the character of Harry in the later books -- though I would hope he'd grow out of that. The sex scene was perfect, tasteful and with depth. "...he let his hand roam to the most tender part of her." Very nice.
My only problem: The guilt to the old mate bit. You may be more embedded in Potter-world, than me, and you apparently have your own variation on that, which may add to the guilt-gristmill. It just didn't ring true. If anything, Harry would be guilty over Ginny, not Ron. Ron was a mate; Ginny was his love. Wouldn't you agree? Report Review
Wow. Wow! Heartwrenching! Report Review
I seem to be going on a Jessamina craze and reading all your stories. I hope you dont mind =D
This story, well, was great! I loved it so much!!!
I felt so bad for Hermione because it came across that she really really really loved him and I thought that he did too but he was always so grouchy and mean and touchy.
But the few last paragraphs, well, were quite what you'd find in those romance books thats my friends are reading currently. =D
10/10 for this story I truly enjoyed it. Now i am off to read your other stories. Report Review
Wow. I love reading your stories... they're all so different, but all so amazing! I mean, i just read the R/Hr, H/G one and it was so sweet and happy, and this one's sort of morbid, obsessive, and desperate almost. But good of course! Just one thing... the juice in the 2nd paragraph sort of appeared out of nowhere. Yay!Author's Response: I have been so busy lately that I haven't been able to respond to everyone's reviews (which kind of makes me hate myself, btw), but you're so energetic and when I read all yours I had to say THANK YOU! I'm so glad you're enjoying yourself with the stories... that's why I wrote them. So that's wonderful. :D Thank you for taking the time to review for so many chapters, and for looking at all the stories! It really means soooo much to me, and I apologize (to everyone who's reading this and has a review unanswered from me!!!) for the late/lack of replies - but just know, you have made my day. :D Thank you thank thank you again for the love and kind words! XD Report Review
That...was absoultely amazing... Report Review
Nice, throughout the story, i wondered what the title "Forgive Me, Please" ever meant but in the end, it fits in perfectly...
By the way, some details in the later part were a bit confusing, might want to edit it if you want... But still, good story! 8/10 Report Review
wow! that was good! 10/10 Report Review
I'm writing this review again, cos I don't know if you got it the first time!
I'm a real fan of your work! You write well and you're true to the characters. I imagine if all those people really died in the last battle, that this is sort of what would take place. Hermione and Harry couldn't just give up on each other and part ways never to speak again! There's too much sewed into the 'friendship'... But they'd be haunted by the past - the best mate/first love... I don't think Ginny is of much consequnce, personally... She seems rather flat and unimportant as a character in the books, personally.. but I think the death of Ron would tear up Harry and Hermione. But to forfeit each other when they managed to survive? Can't see that happening. They'd have to survive somehow together... Anyway, awesome work. I'll read anything you write, even if it's not my interest, cos you're a good writer and true to the characters!
Grace n Peace,
(I don't write HPfanfic, so I don't have an account on here yet... but you can email if you want to respond...) Report Review
Man, oh, man. So sad and hot at the same time. And POOR RON! Great, great story. Kudos!
MD Report Review
awww...that was so sad:( i can't believe they all die...im scared itll happen in Jks version..great read! awesomeAuthor's Response: I'm scared about it too. :( Hopefully it'll be not too bad...
Thanks so much for another wonderful review, hun!! :) So happy you enjoy the stories! Thanks again! Report Review
Hey! I loved this story!
It was really well written! You're a very good author!
Please keep writing, and please update soon!!!Author's Response: Thanks so much!!! I shall try to get back on here more to get some updates going again. I've been slacking... lol Thanks again though!! :D Report Review
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