This is the second best HP fanfic I have read, and I have read quite a few of them. Report Review
I was completely drawn in. Very powerful. Report Review
First 3 chapters makes for very good reading and fascinating to see how you imagined Book 7. It feels much like the original fiction style which I like. Thanks for this. :) I'll carry on reading over the next few days/weeks. Report Review
This is stupid bullshit. You ruined a potentially good story.
1/10. It isn't worth even reading anymore. Report Review
Harry is a half blood you dumb bint. His father is a pureblood, his mom is the muggleborn.any one who knows harry potter knows that you can't be a mudblood if you have a magical parent. Report Review
Harry potter would NEVER hit a woman. No matter her secrets. Not would any other decent man.very bad hit on this chapter. Report Review
Good story so far.but a hint on the "eskimos". you may have accidentally spelled it wrong. It's "inuits" not "inupiats". If you spelled it that way deliberately, my apologies. Report Review
loved this entire story! hope there is a sequel! :) Report Review
I LOVED your story :)
Thankyou for sharing! Report Review
I knew the title of this chapter was familiar couldn't put my finger on it until i read "The old lie: dulce et decorum est pro patria mori" in the authors note. Wilfred Owen wrote that in one of his poem's called Dulce et Decorum est. I remember doing it for hsc.
Anyway, the chapter was fantastic! Report Review
Ahh, so good, would have thought a nice plot twist would have been Arthur Weasly being the "mole" in the ministry and all of the Weasly kids except Ron and Jenny be Serious' kids(Charlie looked alot like him, hint, hint). Also, with the resurection and all, could not imagine Harry giving up after he lost so much...and Tura not coming back to him...aww man!
LOVED IT! Report Review
I have to say this is one of the best fanfics's i've ever read thanks for writing such a good story the rating is for the story over all Report Review
You do know that Tonk's first name is Nymphadora, not Adora, right? Report Review
I'm really enjoying some parts of this so far, but Ondossi is coming across as a total Mary Sue. Her dialogue sounds like an '80s sitcom character with all the wisecracking and bad slang, and she's become a much more important part of the action than really seems warranted from her initial reclusiveness. And a lot of the functions she's fulfilling could, I think, be better and more interestingly filled by many of the other characters. I do love the way you've captured the spirit of the other characters, especially Ron and Hermione. Report Review
I LOVED you story. I only wish I knew what happened between Harry, Severus and Tura. Either way, You did an excellent job. :) Report Review
Some new ideas and well written.
Thanks Report Review
"There was a thump and Lupin lurched forward, and both of them spun about, reaching for their wands.
The broken pear had bounced from Lupin's back and landed on the ground with a moist splat. Though neither man would admit it, even to themselves, each had, on the very edges of their consciousness, heard a distant, familiar bark of laughter."
BRILLIANT! Report Review
I have to say that this is one of the better fanfics i've read. Not the best. Quite a few sub-plots have yet to be concluded and I found the epilogue very disappointing. However, it is extremely creative and unique. I've never read a fanfic quite like this before. The story is engaging but quite confusing at times. Other than that its a good read.
8.5/10 Report Review
This is a very very very good book. It sounds a lot like J.K Rowling! I think you should write real books! Report Review
wow...now that was the story that I wanted to read for the final book...you defo have a lot of talent, and I'm glad you shared it with us. Thanks for writing! Report Review
very very very very very very very very very good Report Review
Happy April Fool's Day! Report Review
This story made me feel so many emotions! Sadness for tura when harry found out her name, then for harry when...well most of the story that one. Confusion, fear, triumph. It was incredible. I enjoyed this much more than Deathly Hallows. Certaintly rather lucky of tura to die just before the two men in her life discovered each other. Must have saved some pretty long arguments. There are only two points i would criticise though. One is the rather blatant use of Lord of the rings references. I've read good crossovers, but i think that here it wasn't enough to be a crossover, and so too much for this story. There was Arthurian references too, but they fit in a lot more naturally. Although Morgan le Fay is rather a mouthful for a curse. Merlin/Mordred/Nimue slide off the tongue a lot more easily lol... The other thing is that there is a very large amount of muggle references. The one that really sticks in my mind is the one in which you say something about not pulling out the damping rods of a nuclear reactor. I find it hard to imagine any of the characters, except maybe a few muggleborns, actually knowing what a nuclear reactor was...But thats just my opinion. And I loved the way you slid in Heisenburg as a squib. That was excellent. I loved this story. Definatley one of my top three favourite stories/series on the site as of yet. Great work :-) I would love to see another novel-length story from you, not perhaps a sequel though, as this has such a nice ending. It would be nice if you could add a scene somewhere at the end to say what happened to ollivander and fortescue though. right. better stop writing this review so that you won't have to stay up all night reading it. Brilliant story, Absolutely loved it. 10 out of 5 stars :-) * Report Review
xcellent story, had me captivated from start 2 finish Report Review
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