Hmm..interesting. pls update soonAuthor's Response: i'll try but i've got exams at the mo. i'll do it as soon as i've finished writing it though Report Review
This is pretty good! A might confusing, but I wasn't concentrating hard enough (not enough sleep). So, I am going to bed now, but keep up the good work!
RebeckaAuthor's Response: sorry if its confusing you... if you tell me what isnt clear i will try to explain better. i hope to have the next chapter of this up after the end of exams. thanks for reading Report Review
I am enjoying your story very much. I have no idea who wrote the poem, normally I'm realy good at figuring stuff like that out but I'm stumped. Can't wait for the next chapter!Author's Response: i guess i havent posted enough of it for you to guess yet... all should become clear either in the next chapter or the one after that. Report Review
Aww...that's so sweet! Author's Response: i loved writing this chapter :P Report Review
Ooh.I love it! I want to know who the poem's from.Ny the way, the banner is awesome! Would you ever consider making one for my story "Wealsey and Riddle"???Author's Response: of course i will, i'll read it through first then give it a stab... i'm glad you like this even if i havent updated in like forever. Report Review
Again I don't really like the fact that Hermione is perfection, grace, beauty and whatnot. I don't think Ron would be that sentimental. And that brings me to Ron writing poems... The idea alone makes me cringe. Yet at the same time I think it's cute. Hmm, I don't really know how I feel about it, but I suspect if Ron would write poetry he would be incredibly bad at it. That said, surprise me and have Ron write something really good! I liked this chapter least of all and hope you will post the next chapter ('Draco', I presume) soon. All in all a charming story so far.Author's Response: you're right, the next chappie is "draco" and it will be up soon, i promise. the point isnt that hermione is perfect, its that the boys think she is. i wouldn't put it past ron to write really dire poetry, but isnt the poem really bad? i just think they're all quite sweet in this fic. i'm so glad you're liking it though. Report Review
I know that when you're in love you tend to think the object of your affection is perfect, but somehow Harry just seems to level headed for this kind of behaviour. I do like the way you write his consideration for Ron's feelings, it's very canon since everybody knows Ron has feelings for Hermione (and vice versa). Good chapter!Author's Response: really? i think harry would get compleatly obsessed if he found the "right" girl for him. i thought he wouldn't want to hurt ron but all the same... we'll see. i'm glad you liked it. Report Review
The grammar and spelling could be improved, but I do like the begiing of this story. I find myself wondering who her secret admirer might be. I love the last lines about Draco, by the way.Author's Response: thanks. i will ask my beta to check this chapter if you don't think it comes up to scratch. i love this story because something similar happened to me once so i ca write that into this :) Report Review
hi. iv read this story like 5 times now, and i just realized that i haven't left a review:( sorry bout that. well here goes. ..i really really like it. different idea then others iv read. i wonder who she will end up with, and who the letter are from. is there like some from each draco ron and harry? or is it all one of them? and i really want ron to send her that letter!..anyways, i can't decide who iw ant hermione to be with either! in my opinion, not harry, cuz i like him with ginny, but draco or ron? i just don't know!plllzz update soon! i really want to read more!
xoxVLAuthor's Response: the poem is from... wait and see. you'll find out in the next 2 or 3 chapies. i really will try to update soon but i have to revise for my up coming exams too :( Report Review
so rons gonna send the letter?
and then harrys gonna send her one?
and draco sent the first one?
and so three guys are gonna like her?
i like yor story and ya plz dont abandon it this good become a hugely reviewed popular story.
im a big hermione/draco shipper (hint) wink winkAuthor's Response: it will all become apparent soon... i have finally decided where i'm going to take this. i wont abandon it, but i'm really slow at updating things. i'm glad you like it :) Report Review
hiya! this is pretty good so far but i think its moving a lil bit slow because in 3 chapters nuthin much has really happened besides the poem and how harry and ron feel. i like it tho. i think it will be quite good when it hasa few more chappies. btw are there going to be any pairings for this fic because i dont think there was any listed. yea so keep writing!Author's Response: there will be pairings, none were listed because i didn't want to give the game away, its supposed to be a bit of a mystery, sorry if its really transparent. i'm glad you like it though Report Review
I love this. It could have been Ron since he writes poetry, i don't think its Harry as he won't make a move unless Ron says or possibly its someone else.maybe a fellow room mate who found the poems and named them his own.i wonder.
xxKayleighxxAuthor's Response: i'm so glad this is still keeping people guessing. there will be at least 2 more chappies before i tell you all who sent it ;) so please don't explode in the meantime. i'm glad you like it. Report Review
Hey i love your fan fiction!please let herm stay with ron please!
-ilianaAuthor's Response: she can make her own mind up. at this stage of this particular fic she isn't with anyone so she isn't techically breaking with ron or anyone whoever she chooses. i'm sure she will tell me when she's made up her mind whats going to happen in this fic. i swear the charecters write through me, i dont do anything :). i'm glad you're enjoying it though Report Review
very good. i think u should continue. nothing wrong w/the story!Author's Response: i'm going to, i've just been working on my latest one shot recently so i haven't had time to post the next chappie. Report Review
awesome. tell ur friend that the poem is execllent. Author's Response: i'll tell her you liked it... Report Review
oh wow. i think this is gonna get very complicated before it's over. oh man, so was it Harry who sent the letter? i think it was Draco, but then there was that line at the end here about Harry writing how he felt. huh. i can't wait to see what happens next!Author's Response: its supposed to be a bit complicated, if its straight forward where's the mystery? i'm not going to give away any clues at this stage as to who sent the letter... wait and see Report Review
Hermione is portrayed in a very different light in this chapter. She seems almost slytherin as in she doesn't care that she's not all that interested in Draco, it would just be nice to have the guy everybody wants. i like the way you write, i think the words you use are very well chosen and describe very well. thanks for reviewing my story!Author's Response: your welcome for the review... i worte it as more that she isnt in love with him but that she's prepared to be swept off her feet by anyone who makes the effort. Report Review
Hi, again. I liked it, it was short and sweet. I think you should keep going in the same diection with this story. It could become a hit.Author's Response: ohhh no, this baby's gonna get mixed up goood, the next couple of chappies should get you thinnking a bit more, so i may post another one soon Report Review
That was great, I also have a story that needs to be posted. Anyways that was great! I like the twists you through into it. Keep up the good work.Author's Response: thanks, i hope it stays a bit puzzling but not TOO confusing :) Report Review
Hmm... I want to read more of your stories, but the quote 'Who could it be' on the banner reminded me of one of my favorite songs -and sadly enough, I started singing it outloud -_-' But, this story intrigues me, though I was a bit confused at the beginning. I want to know who it iiiis!! I'll laugh if it's not Harry, Ron, or Draco and turns out to be someone like Neville or Dean... or Michael Corner from Ravenclaw! I don't know why that would make me laugh, but, you know. Okay, I'm going to stop rambling now!Author's Response: cool, who is the song by and what is it called? i may be able to use it in the next chappie. yeah, i guess you're going to have to wait and see who sent it... but i HAVE finally decided. :) please do reaad some of my other work :) Report Review
Oh, i enjoyed it. It's very sweet so far. I just wish there were more to read. Happy writing.Author's Response: yeah, i hope chapter 2 will be up very soon Report Review
That was intresting. I felt so sorry for Hermione in the beginning and now i really want to know who the poem was from! Please update!Author's Response: oh dear, i dont think we'll be finding out for quite a few chappies yet, i still have'nt decided myself Report Review
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