Reading Reviews for The American Twin
  
50 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Nikay The Begining of the Discovery

7th January 2008:
Loved it can't really review gotta keep reading

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Review #2, by PotterGirl75 The Begining of the Discovery

26th July 2007:
I love it!

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Review #3, by Imawriter The Meeting of a Lifetime

15th June 2007:
Loved it, again! 10/10! Can't wait to read more...long chapter, but I loved it!

Author's Response: Yay!! Thanks a bunch for taking the time to leave a review!! :D

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Review #4, by Imawriter The Begining of the Discovery

14th June 2007:
Nice... 10/10! There were 2 things I DIDN'T like. 1. Five and four would be oppisite each other (or were you saying the one next to it was No. three or seven?) 2. Who all is in her family?
Other than that, I loved it.

Author's Response: He he he, they would be across from each other wouldn't they!! Good catch! Who's in her family: Bennett Summers (adoptive father), Riley Summers (adoptive mother), Jessica Summers (daughter of the Summers), and of course, Sam. Hope that cleared everything up! Thank you sooooooooooooooo much for the ten!!

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Review #5, by SunSation Gal 07 End of the Year

20th May 2007:
OMG! It was so good! I can't belive that its over! Loved every minute of this story! You will definatly be seeing ma at the sequel!

Author's Response: Awww! Thank you! :P and thanks for being my most loyal reviewer! Sequel should be up really soon. Thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by xxMugglePrincess The Begining of the Discovery

20th May 2007:
It was a nice start! :)

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I love to get reviews like these! ;D

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Review #7, by Haley_Pitter End of the Year

20th May 2007:
great story and amazing ending! i cant wait til the sequel!

Author's Response: Yay! You reviewed! Thanks a lot for the compliments :D really made my day. Sequel should be out before too long. If you want sneak peeks of the sequel, check out my website at freewebs.com/fanof24

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Review #8, by Gin The Meeting of a Lifetime

20th May 2007:
well that was different but i would have made both sam and harry famous but hay it is your story do with it as you will

Author's Response: Yeah, I thought about that too. But I think that having Sam less famous then Harry is going to be cause for some conflict later on in the series. *grins evilly* Anyways, thanks for your imput, I might just go back and edit this story...thanks for reviewing!!! :D

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Review #9, by Gin The Begining of the Discovery

20th May 2007:
WOW is all i can say you have a talant for writing

Author's Response: Awwwwwwwwwwwww!!! *blushes* thank you sooooo much!

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Review #10, by SunSation Gal 07 Hermione's Wisdom

8th May 2007:
Aw, only one more chapter. And thanks for deicating this to me, it means a lot. It really does. And this chapter just happened to be validated of my 18th B-day, so it's like and update of one of my favorite stories for my birthday. Anyway, great chapter as always and I am very mush looking forwayd to the final chapter.

Author's Response: :) Yep, only one more chapter! I dedicated this story to you because 1)I think you were the very first person to review it. 2) You've reviewed every chapter since! 3)You've made brilliant banners for this story...and the sequel. :) Thanks a bunch for sticking with this story, means a lot to me!!!

Next chapter should be coming out shortly!


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Review #11, by Shaylee_FontetPotter Heart to Heart

8th May 2007:
Alright I just want to know one thing...how is Sam important?? This story just kind of makes her feel like an added character, or a replacement for Hermione.
I think that if you're going to add in a character that they need to have a little more meaning. If Harry and Sam are twins then you need to explain what makes them two halves of the same whole. Give Sam a little more character and the story would be better.
~Shaylee~

Author's Response: :) Thanks a lot for your input, I'll definately take your advice.

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Review #12, by ValorOrgulloso The Begining of the Discovery

29th April 2007:
wow, thanks for the AMAZING banner! I can't make one myself because I just plain old don't know how, and I don't have the program. It really is great!

Author's Response: Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You are officially the first person that I have made a banner for! I'm really glad you like it :D That's a confidence booster!

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Review #13, by SunSation Gal 07 Down the hole

24th April 2007:
Yay, were getting towards the end. No! That means it's almost over! But yet yay for I have seen that you are planning a sequel on your website. So yay! Great chapter as always and I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Yay you reviewed!!!!!!! Yep, it's almost over. I have the rest of the chapters written, I just need to post. (There's only like two left) Thank you sooooooooooo much for taking the time to leave such a wonderful review! Really made my day! =)

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Review #14, by fawks Hermione's Return

20th April 2007:
i have been eagerly checking for updates to this story and i think you have done an excelent job in convincing the reader that harry potter has a twin sister . i quite like your ideas to this enriching novel that show numeruos possibilities for the ending. good luck for the next chapter which i am eargerly awaiting.

Author's Response: Awwwwwwwww! Thank you soooooo much! *blushes* The next chapter should be up really soon. Thanks for reviewing, it means bunches to me!!!!

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Review #15, by SunSation Gal 07 Hermione's Return

19th April 2007:
I'm doing good. How 'bout you? A very good chapter once again. I love how you have weaved Sam into theplot of SS. That and I just love Sam, she's cool. That is an interesting thought. Hmm. As always, I look forward to more.

Author's Response: Yippie! You reviewed! Thank you sooooooooo much for the awesome compliments, they really keep me inspired! Anyways, thanks for reviewing! Next chapter should be up fairly quick.

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Review #16, by SunSation Gal 07 Book Burning

27th March 2007:
It was great! I really like Sam. She's cool. I hope this review makes you happy then! Great chapter and I look forward to more!

Author's Response: Awwww thanks! This review made my day! Next chappie is coming soon!

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Review #17, by SunSation Gal 07 Dun dun dun!

18th March 2007:
Good. very good. ZI have no suggestions. Your doing just fine on your own. Look forward to more.

Author's Response: Aww thanks! More's comin, should be up with in the next week or so.

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Review #18, by phantombrick Dun dun dun!

18th March 2007:
give us more plese i am looking forward to reading more of your work

Author's Response: More's on its way! Thank you sooooooo much for reviewing, really boosts author's confidence to get reviews like this one!

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Review #19, by SunSation Gal 07 Heart to Heart

8th March 2007:
No problem, and great chapter. And I may make you another banner soon. My skills have increased tremendously. Great chap as always and look forward to more.

Author's Response: Thankies! Yay first to review. Aaaaaaaaaaandd you said it was good! Yipee. Oooh, another banner, sure! I love new banners! And I love your banners! Thanks for reviewing, much appreciated!

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Review #20, by ValorOrgulloso The Arrival

23rd December 2006:
Omigosh... you like 24? That show is, like, my idol. Jack Bauer is AMAZING! Unless you're not talking about the tv show... nice story!! I think i may have already commented, but it never hurts to comment twice!

Author's Response: I LOVE the show 24!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(And Jack Bauer) It's my favorite show ever! I'm counting down the days until the new season. Anyways, thank you sooooooooooo much for the wonderful compliment, it really inspires writers when people comment on their stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Review #21, by pixie_garden The Begining of the Discovery

8th December 2006:
this is very good. i would just like to point out that it is 'privet drive' not 'private drive'. but apart from that it is good. :)

Author's Response: Oops! I didn't catch that! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! Not to mention the wonderful compliment! I hope you keep reading.

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Review #22, by SunSation Gal 07 Slipped Mistakes

2nd December 2006:
It wasn't horrible, it was really good! Look forward to more!

Author's Response: Thanks! You really made my day! I'm working on the next chapter right now, so hopefully I'll be able to udate quickly. Thanks for reading and reviewing!

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Review #23, by Haley_Pitter Slipped Mistakes

1st December 2006:
good job, but Quirrel is spelled like: Quirrel. nice work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing! Thanks for catching that. Thanks for reading, I hope you continue to like what you read!

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Review #24, by padfoot and prongs foreva The Meeting of a Lifetime

24th November 2006:
very cute!!!
good job!

lyl lyl

Author's Response: Thanks! It's always good to have people compliment your work! Your stories are really cool too. Thank you so much for taking the time to review, hope you like anything else you read!

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Review #25, by padfoot and prongs foreva The Begining of the Discovery

24th November 2006:
errr..y did the family adopt her if htey didnt like her!!
seems interesting so far!!

lyl lyl

Author's Response: He he he! The truth about why they adopted her will be revealed at a later point in time! Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

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