{reviewid: 2366930, reviewer: 'Meg_'}
23rd June 2010:
Wow. Well played. Hermione's ridiculousness and Harry's awkwardness were all right on point. I'm glad you didn't make them kiss. It was satisfyingly surprising. Anyway I loved the one shot. 9/10. I feel like you should right a sequel or make this a short story though. Just a suggestion.
~Meg
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{reviewid: 2346716, reviewer: 'MoonyandProngs'}
13th May 2010:
That was great! I like how Harry tried to make a joke out of what happened, but it didn't work. 10/10!
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{reviewid: 1308790, reviewer: 'Pat'}
16th February 2007:
It was cute but it would be better if they got together
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{reviewid: 1303612, reviewer: 'lveiswierd123'}
12th February 2007:
awe! Very detailed! loved it! uh.i know it was a one shot, but maybe a sequel of some sort?
LOL
~*~*~Lveiswierd123(lauren)
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{reviewid: 1287028, reviewer: 'Meg'}
31st January 2007:
That was really good! Both of their characters were well written. You should continue this one-shot. Ya know, make it a two-shot. I'm serious write a follow up cause this is good. I really loved the opening line, it was very Hermione-esque and the awkwardness of being around girls was very Harry-esque. Well done.
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{reviewid: 1122673, reviewer: 'do%20you%20really%20want%20to%20know%3F'}
| Review #6, by do you really want to know? | A Moment |
31st August 2006:
hey its really great, but you know what. I think it would be a really kool begining to a story. Its yours tho, just saying
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{reviewid: 1104692, reviewer: 'Chaz4Harry'}
15th August 2006:
Aww! That was sweet! Plz write more! I want to see what happens next!!!!! 10/10 ^_^
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{reviewid: 1104658, reviewer: 'Fallen%20Angel'}
15th August 2006:
aww... 10!
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{reviewid: 1103750, reviewer: 'H_Hshipper'}
14th August 2006:
Aww!
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{reviewid: 1103545, reviewer: 'harry_potter_freaks'}
14th August 2006:
Great story!!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1101258, reviewer: 'HermionelovesHarry'}
| Review #11, by HermionelovesHarry | A Moment |
12th August 2006:
Please write another chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.
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{reviewid: 1091737, reviewer: 'Thelastwolf'}
4th August 2006:
Wonderful teasing first scene of what would probably be a great
Harry/Hermione story.
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{reviewid: 1082099, reviewer: 'hermionerox101'}
29th July 2006:
it's cool... not as good as the last train ride to hogwarts, though, but I liked it... so does my friend that is sitting here beside me, giving me suggestions on wat 2 write on my reviews :-P but overall, it deserved a good 8
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{reviewid: 1069191, reviewer: 'mikoreincarnate'}
19th July 2006:
this story was short 'n sweet, just the way i like. But i would like to see what would happen next. keep up the great work!!!!!!!!
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{reviewid: 1063106, reviewer: 'Cowboy'}
15th July 2006:
As my girlfriend would say "Awwww! This is sooo cute!" but, I'm not her, so I'm just gonna say that this is really good and heart warming.
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{reviewid: 1059915, reviewer: 'Belle%20Etoile'}
12th July 2006:
awww cute
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{reviewid: 1059061, reviewer: 'liz'}
12th July 2006:
that was really sweet. Very well written. Great one shot! It made me smile. I really liked it!
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{reviewid: 1058913, reviewer: 'Fanfair'}
12th July 2006:
Dang was that good for a minute there I thought they were going to make out but they didn't but it was good. If they scoring is just five I'm going to give you a ten because it was very wounderful. Plz do write more stories like that but maybe a bit longer.
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