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Review #1, by Harrys_BabyGirl Prologue: Void

8th April 2007:
Hm. Since English is not your first language you are forgiven for the grammar and spelling mistakes. Some thiings you could change, though, are the spacing. alot of your words are stuck together, likethis. I also wonder why Ron seems to have lost his memory. I will make you a banner, if you wish, but I'm not very good at it. If you want me to make you one e-mail me here: Hailsstorm@aol.com with this form:

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Review #2, by pens82 Prologue: Void

10th July 2006:
great start update soon

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