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Review #1, by navygirl529 My Thoughts

30th July 2006:
yayy!!!! new chappie! i am so happy you got validated! this one was neat! I liked how personal and revealing James' thoughts were; very cool approach! i can;t wait for more of the story to unfold! keep it up girl!

Author's Response: yay i didn't really notice that my new chapter got validated! i'm glad you like it!!! i have chapter 3 written i just have to type it!!!! keep r/r!!

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Review #2, by Seamusfan1 (not signed in.) Train Troubles

25th July 2006:
Fabulous first chapter! Love it! Can't wait to see where you go with it! If you want e to make a banner, my offer still stands...

Author's Response: yay do you think you could make me a banner?? thanks a ton! and thanks for reviewing!!!! and thanks a lot for the suggestions!

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Review #3, by navygirl529 Train Troubles

15th July 2006:
awesome! definitely keep on this! i love the way James cared when Lily got hurt! most definitely keep on writing and i'll keep reading girl!

Author's Response: lol thanks a lot for your review... the second chapter is in the works... i don't really know where to go from here... i might need your help!

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Review #4, by GinnyGirl333 Train Troubles

8th July 2006:
I have a few questions:
1. Why are Lily and Malfoy on first name terms?
2. Why does James act like an arrogant berk at first, then say he's changed, then acts like it?
3. Why were Lily's friends and the excedingly handsome marauders talking?

It started out a lot like other Lily James fics, but I think you have a lot of potential. Good luck with this one! I'll read the next chappie once you update.

Author's Response: answers....

1. not everyone talks with last names... i think lily is only really mean to james, everyone else (even if she hates them) she is nice (or somewhat nice) to because she is headgirl.
2. i don't really have a good answer to this one. maybe it is just to show how he was last year, and that he really really likes her.
3. lily's friends were talking to the marauders because they are friends with them. Lily doesn't want them there because she hates james (and isn't too fond of sirius)

thank you a lot for reading and reviewing! thanks for your input and please keep telling me what doesn't make sense and what needs work. this is my first ever fanfiction and all the help i can get would be great!


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Review #5, by nyyfan102 Train Troubles

5th July 2006:
I like it very much!!!!!! Keep Writing Haze, it's awesome!

Author's Response: thanks... i'm working on the next chapter... i might need your help! thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by kaitlyn Train Troubles

4th July 2006:
i kike your story a lot! u should continue it. if ur from the U.S, happy indipendance day!if ur not, well have a happy day any way!

Author's Response: yay! you liked my story!!! thanks for reviewing!! ok i guess i'll keep it going... i'll attempt to write a new chapter soon... and happy independance day to you too!

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