4 Reviews Found
Review #1, by HauntedLyra22 In the Trophy Room
27th May 2007:
i like it...but what i didnt like was this "Our main character" it sounds too...fake...i dont know other than that i really like it! choppy though all the scence changes makes it sound choppy! just some constructive critsim...i hate when people cant take criticism!!
rOcK oN!
-Lyra

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Review #2, by sirislyinlove In the Trophy Room
24th July 2006:
do not go on? honey there is nothing to go on to. get some more chapters and i'm suggesting femmeslash

Author's Response: Can you explain how there is nothing to go on to? And this isn't a one-shot. There will be more chapters. And I'll decide what kind of slash to do, if I want to do any slash at all.

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Review #3, by Liadan Lightflower In the Trophy Room
16th July 2006:
Its sucks....nah I'm only joking. I really like the fact that it is graphic; it gives it a sense of realism. I thought it was a good start. Please review my story "Another Day, A Different Way".

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Review #4, by mini_marauders In the Trophy Room
4th July 2006:
omg keep writing i have to find out what happenes

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