sweetest thing ever!!!

Author's Response: :)
-angelx33

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awww!! how cute!!!:D

Author's Response: =] Thanks.
-angelx33

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No offence and all but this wasnt very good. I'm sorry.
You need to tidy your writing a bit. And look over your work.

Sorry, but I wont be reading the next chapter. I skimmed it and its like this one so sorry. I really am! Please forgive

~d_f

Author's Response: Thanks for the suggestion, I will.
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Loved the story!!! Its quite nice really! I'll definetly be reading more
Oh, just one thing. (Sorry, I hate to critisice but critisment is very good) Just dont pull things out too much. like stay on one subject and keep pulling at it when you've got enough out of it. Sorry, not the best way to describe but I hope you just consider it. It could be handy, ya never know:D

well, good luck with your writing!!
~d_f

9/10

Author's Response: I think I know what you mean and I'll definately try to improve my writing. Thanks!

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GREAT FIC BUT U NEED 2 CHECK UR SPELLING.


Author's Response: Thanks for the advice, I definately will.
-angelx33

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I love this chapter!!!
Please Update!!!

Author's Response: thanks. sorry for the lack of updates, i'm not really in the mood. please give me a week or so.
-angelx33

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very fabulus!!update soon!10/10

Author's Response: thanks! =] i'll update as soon as possible. maybe in the next 1-2 weeks or so.
-angelx33

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great update asap!!!

Author's Response: =] thanks. I'll try to update soon.
-angelx33

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please please hurry this is getting really good so bye

Author's Response: Well I've submitted it but it HPFF hasn't validated Chapter 10 yet...sorry.
-angelx33

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weird ending...

Author's Response: =]

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o, i wonder WHAT in the world happens next?? lol

Author's Response: hmm i wonder... xD lol.

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isnt james so noble. lol how could lily NOT fall in love with him. lol

Author's Response: lol don't we wish guys at our school were that noble? although, as discussed, not many chances pop up. xD
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cant think of nething to put for this one... lol. very good

Author's Response: lol okay =D

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dont worry.. it wasnt THAT awful... it was CRAZY awful. lol xD jk. good job. more... write more. lol

Author's Response: =] lol I'm glad you like it.

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that was short... lol not one of ur best chapters. lol

Author's Response: yeaah some are shorter than others. =]
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that was really good... lol very good story... so far. u btr not ruin it. lol. beginning to read the next one... ill comment again later. lol

Author's Response: lol. knowing me, i'll probably ruin it by the end. xD oh well. enjoy it while it lasts! xD
-angelx33

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pretty bad

Author's Response: well pranav, if you bothered to read it.
-wendy.

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well, that was more girly than the last one. but still, must give u credit for being able to extend ur usual short vocabulary in this story.

ps. i hope u didnt use the thesaurus or else u would just b proving me wrong... lol

pps. ur rating is 9.5. out of 100

ppps. jk, good story

Author's Response: lol well i don't talk with a vast amount of vocabulary. xD
lol i didn't.
lol thanks. xD
-angelx33

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that SUCKED... lol jk. i bet im the FIRST guy on this reply list... it was really good. lol very luvy duvy. lol nice... im a girl... says u as ur sitting rite next to me. lol

Author's Response: lol you actually are. maybe. i don't know. xD lol thanks. and yes, as i said as i sat next to you. xD
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m. :> i like this one. it's funny. when is the next capter coming? i'll be waiting for it.

Author's Response: yay! =] next chapter should be awaiting validation either today or tommorow.
-angelx33

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this story is good, update soon!

Author's Response: thanks! =] almost done with Chapter 10. Should be up within the week.
-angelx33

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Great story! update soon

=]

Author's Response: Thanks! =] I'll update as soon as possible. Almost done with next chapter.
-angelx33

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A broom closet, hmmm... many different possible scenarios. Great job. Can't wait for the next chapter. Please update soon.

Author's Response: Yup. =] Thanks. The next chapter is pretty long. It's already like 3000 words and I still have the ball to write about. xD
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is that a *gasp* a broom closet or hey its a broom closet*suggestive wink*

~Scarhead

Author's Response: hehe. unfortunately, i don't know you'll be happy if you knew what happened in the next chapter for that part. xD
oops. i should quit talking before i give away too much! =P
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"Did you know, gullible isn't in the dictionary!!" James said matter-of-factly.

"Really?" asked Lily with wide eyes.

James doubled in laughter, "Told you you were gullible!"

i coulda sworn i read that in a diff. storie...o well gr8 storie wish there was more remus/serena(sp?!) tho but yea 10/10

Author's Response: oh. if you did i'm sorry, i didn't mean to plagorize. the gullible thing was something my friends and i did when we were younger and i remembered so i put it in.
and i'll try to put in more remus/serena. =]
-angelx33

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