good story but i feel obligated 2 tell you lee's second name is Jordan not Gorden

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OMFG CLIFF HANGER... KINDA
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER
p.s how exactly do james and lily play into this is it just from the past chapter when the twins Apaula and Adamien were telling about there life? I gotta no
pp.s great chap again 100/10
ppp.s keep up the good work


Author's Response: thank u so much plese keep reading and trust me james and lily come in once in a flashback and once in ghost form.

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OMFG
I cant believe it
off to read next chappie

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MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMoooooooooooooooooooooooooorrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee.

Author's Response: im glad you liked it once my the first chapter of my latest story about Lupin and y he doest want to get with Tonks is validated i will put the next chapter in this story up thanx for the reveiw!!!

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Very good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: thank you see i said it would get better. chapter three is giving me a hard time for ot to get validated but hopefully it will be up soon thanx 4 the review keep reading please

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back i am to comment on my own story!!!! hahahah!!! better but I still like the third chapter better.

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the first chapter is crappy, the second better, but when the third comes out that's the big one

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this is good....and i just wanted to let you know i made you a banner....seeing as you didn't have one....and i was bored...so check it out...if you like it...i might let you have it...j/k what else would i use it for? :) christine

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Author's Response: Thanx for the banner!!!!

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Good job. So sad about Oliver Wood. Got teary...

Author's Response: thanks! I know its a little slow going but the story will get better. please keep reading!!!! my second chapter is awaiting validation.

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This story, none the less, S-U-C-K-E-D!!!! You don't say in the summary that it turns out good and that its your fanfic. Everyone thinks this is a waste of time, hello! Duh! Yah, pretty much the whole story reeked of rotten eggs.

Improve though! I know this is your first fanfic! Everyone does bad on their first ones... LMAO

CBTS

Author's Response: im sorry you thought that but like i said its my first fic and its going to get better i promise. its just well its a really long drawn out story so a few chapters will as you said suck. almost every story has a chapter that sucks this just happenes to be mine. im sorry you didn't like it but i know that it is going to get better cause i have the whole plot figured out for all the other chapters. i'll make you a deal if you read the next chapter and you dont like i will take the story off the archieve and you will never have to see the story that reeked of rotten eggs again. (basically i have another story in mind that i know for a fact is good and i want to write it.)

~*wannabe_Dracosgirl~*

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