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Review #1, by fanof24 How it all began....

9th March 2007:
That was pretty good! The detail was nice, but I do think you could have improved in that department. You have good vocab, and you portrayed the character's emotions well. Overall you did a wonderful job with this story, and I'd love to see where it goes. Please update soon! 7/10 is my rating. Because I do believe that you could take the detail up a couple of notches, but other than that this is a great piece of work.

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