this was good but i got a bit long Report Review
Ok so I read this story ages ago when I started fanfictioning... I love the missing moment genre (I do alot myself most of my chapters allude in someway to a missing moment) and you do it so well...
Please can I use the dropping off at the cinema thing in my story please - I'll obviously put a reference you at the bottom of mine... Let me know via a review or on the forum...
Keep writing... your very goodAuthor's Response: Thanks for your review, Just Super, and sure, you can use the idea, if I didn't get back to you too late. Sorry about that. Real Life kind of gets in the way sometimes. Report Review
I do love your rendition of this missing moment... (I love missing moment stories) I like that there is the seeds of feelings there and that you under played it... at this stage in there relationship it was needed...
O and the communicating without word thing was cool and so them... I bet their ability to do that is what got them though Harry's Sir-Vexed-Alot stage...
I also like how you did Percy Prat face... Your a cool writer now on to the next...Author's Response: Thanks, JustSuper. Ron and Hermione have been friends for so long that I feel like they have long been able to communicate with merely a look- and I'm sure that Harry can read them just as well, though you're right, he probably didn't notice because he was focused on everyone who was trying to kill him. (That kind of makes you miss things.) I really enjoyed writing Percy's argument with his father. I think it is an interesting facet of the Weasley family that can never be fully explored by JKR since the books are told from Harry's perspective. Report Review
everything just works so perfectly..
I'm SO happy that you decided to continue this fic.
i was looking through my faves, readily deleting things and say the week of a weasley wedding...or as I called it TWOAWW.. and had to come to this story and saw that you added a new chapter!!!
I love your writing and this story... i would give 10 ratings to all..
oh yah, response to Author Note:life can wait.. haha.. jk
"This message will self-destruct in thirty seconds"Author's Response: Thanks, Ritu. I'm glad that you enjoyed it. This is one of my favorite stories that I have written, so I'm glad that there are others that have enjoyed it. Report Review
Sorry it took me so long to get here - i only just noticed that you had posted an update! This chapter was wonderful - I love stories about Ron and Hermione when Harry isn't there. Excellent Work, as per usual! :o) 10/10 ~ andy x x xAuthor's Response: Hi, Andy! Sorry it took me so long to update! I hope to continue this through OotP, but at the rate I'm going you'll be out of university before I make it to Christmas! Oh, well, thanks for stopping by, and I'm glad that you enjoyed this! Report Review
So does this story discount the HBP? I hope so...I want some Hr/R action! Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by, Avanell. Sorry, it doesn't discount HBP, but I do think R/Hr's relationship changed a lot that year, so I'm working on that. Report Review
I'm not really sure how to describe what I feel about this story. You really have a touch for writing stories that show how sheltered my life is. This was heart-wrenching and heart-warming at the same time. A beautiful piece - you're definitely one of my favourite authors.Author's Response: Thanks, andharrywokeup. Believe me, you're one of my favourite reviewers. Your opinion really means a lot. I think I am bowing to pressure to continue this, so keep an eye out for more... Report Review
don't let it end here! this seems like such a great beginning rather than a complete story! please continue!
Sudha53Author's Response: Thanks, Sudha! I'm thinking about continuing it at least one more chapter. We'll see! Report Review
How lovely! Is it a one-shot, or are you going to continue on to Grimmauld place? I'd love for you to keep going - this is very well done. Nice one! PalomaAuthor's Response: Hi, Paloma! Thanks for dropping by! I was originally going to continue this, but then it got so long that I decided against it, but I'm beginning to think that I may pick it back up. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
that was really cute! It would be nice if u made more chapters to follow up on what happenes though, cause it looks very interesting. This was a very good read, congrats.Author's Response: Thanks, snitch_catcher07! I may continue this, so keep an eye out! Report Review
YAY!! ok, i hope you remember me from my endless reviews on the week of a weasley wedding.. i am SO happy that i found this.. it's as good as TWOAWW( two aww? i think you know what i mean.. hehe) umm.. i really really hope you write more r/hr... with FLUFFINESS!!!! don't forget fluffiness.. please write more.. i love what you write... bye bye j.k.rowling..;)Author's Response: Hey, Ritu! Of course I remember you! I never realized that those initials were TWOAWW. Sounds like something we should all say together now... Thanks for being such a faithful reviewer, and I'm sure I'll have some stories with more fluffiness down the line somewhere! Report Review
wow...super awesome. i am happy that you put this up here. its a pretty incrediable one-shot. awesome writing and it's going into my favorites.
LMW 100/10Author's Response: Thanks, LMW! I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I liked writing it, even though it was a bit challenging to get that arguement right. Report Review
I'm sorry it's only a one shot. I'd sure like to read more!Author's Response: Thanks for dropping by with a review, oldvw67! Yes, this one is a one-shot, but I have a few other stories out there if you would like to check them out. (What's a little bit of self-promotion among friends?) Report Review
That was absolutely brilliant. The writing just flowed so naturally. I loved the last paragraph too...it was one of my favourite parts in the story.
10/10 stars!!!!!!!!!! Author's Response: Thanks, Maurader Mcgonagall! I really appreciate your review! Report Review
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