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Review #1, by Pure Muggle Death is only the Beginning

30th June 2006:
Hi there. This has potential to be a really interesting story. For future chapters, could you space it out a bit - make paragraphs. It is easier to read that way. A good start and it'll be interesting to see how your fic will continue! Keep up the good work. :o) ~PBM

Author's Response: Thanx! You're my first review ever, and thanks for the sugestions. L

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