I liked this story. It was soo sad Also I was wondering if you were still going to rewrite life or something like it...

Author's Response: I hadn't considered it to tell you the truth. I found Raine to be too Mary-Sue for my liking. However, I'm willing to rewrite if people like the character so much.

 Report Review

I like the way Oliver showed no emotion yet it was obvious he was feeling it. It made the story more realistic in my point of view.Thats exactly how I felt when someone quite close to me died and in those two chapters you managed to portray it perfectly. Keep it up this story is one of my favirotes

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I actually editing the last two chapters and I'm working on the next one. Hopefully it won't take me too long to get the next one out. :D --JC

 Report Review

This was a stunning start; so unexpected for an Oliver fic, but yet so well written. I felt like I was actually in the scene ... I could picture it perfectly, which is so hard to capture sometimes, from a writer's POV. I would give you a favorite quote, but it was all so good I just can't choose. Well, I cannot wait to read more from you, so please update soon! =Dunlevy

Author's Response: Thank you very much. The next chapter is in the process of being added.

 Report Review

Cute start. I can't wait to read mroe!

Author's Response: Thanks so much. I'm sending in the next chapter soon.
--JC

 Report Review

Yes! I loved it. It's different and interesting! I'm putting it in my favorites and waiting for more.

Author's Response: :D Thanks so much. That makes me feel all warm and fuzzy inside. --JC

 Report Review

I Like this story keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks so much. --JC

 Report Review