Liked this. Your Sirius character was really good!
marauderqueen
10

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That was great. Good job!
10/10

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It was good, but you might want to consider requesting Beta on the forums part of the site. Great job!

Author's Response: I'm fully aware that the grammar is horrible, I just re-read the thing... and well I fixed a lot of mistakes =) Entmaiden just started betaing my other story, so I got that part covered.

Glad you liked it, Thanks for reviewing! =)
~Kaley

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That was a really great story! Keep up the excellent work!!!

-Roz
10/10

Author's Response: Thanks =) I'm glad you liked it!
~Kaley

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i hav friends just like them.
luv the story!!!
im just lik sirius (only in girl version)
~alyssa

Author's Response: hahah... Lucky you =) I'm glad you liked it! Thanks!
~Kaley

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that was so funny, and good, your writting is very very good, and you can keep the readers wanting to know more about the story, that was a great story, and I love sirius.keep up the good work, and maybe you could make a sequal

Lolhee

Author's Response: Thanks!=) maybe I should... I'll think about it.. Everytime I see the name Lolhee I keep thinking Lolhee is my master.. hahaha...
~Kaley

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Great! A few spelling mistakes, but that's all right, I still loved the story!

loved the "we will have a son called Harry" part. haha..

Author's Response: Thanks.. =) still working on the spelling part... I love that part too....
~Kaley

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lol funny I was hoping to find something like this. I like the whole "we'll have a son called."

Author's Response: Thanks =D that was the response I was hoping for =P
~Kaley

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i liked this, it was cool and funny (even though peter shouldve exploded or something b/c hes an evil weak little rat-sorry i dont like him much, b/c he put sirius, one of the coolest hpo characters ever, in prison, o'course i understand y he has to seem to be a friend and all, but he still suckx)--i think im gonna read your other story too, i like how u write...its fun to read...and humourous, which is always a good thing

Author's Response: Thanks =P I totally agree with you,I don't like Peter either, but he's after all their friend (wonder why..) so just had to add him.. That would have been very nice =P
Thanks for your wonderful review!
~Kaley

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Hahaha! That was really great! I laughed so much! Keep up the great work! :D

Author's Response: hehe.. Thanks! Glad you thought it was funny!
~Kaley

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I think this is the second time I read this. I Adore it! =) I love your writing style and the complete irony... haha he failed. XD!

Author's Response: hehe. aww.. thanks.. *doing a happy dance* Thanks for the review.. again...=P
They make me very happy!
~Kaley


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I am guessing he found out. =D Yay. Your story ROCKS! =D
I feel that all the stories based around Sirius must have lots and lots of reviews. So I am contributing and reviewing as many Sirius stories as I can. =D
Spelling mistakes:
Griffingdoor [Gryffindor], Probaly [Probably], Chanse [Chance],

Author's Response: Thanks!! I totally agree, all stories with Sirius should have lots of reviews!

Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistakes.
I'm not so good and grammar and stuff..
My dictionary usually helps me, but it's difficult to find all my mistakes =P
~Kaley

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ha ha This sounds like a brain leak....but I like it!!

Author's Response: lol... thanks! I'm glad you liked it! =P

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Nice. I liked the last paragraph there, it was a good way to end the story. I laughed a few times, too. Haha. Good job.

I did notice a few grammer and spelling errors. One being Gryffindor. You kepr spelling it Gryffingdoor. Besides that, everything was fine and I was really into the story, too.

I noticed you have another story, too. It seems really interesting and I can't wait for it to come out. I can make a banner for you there if you want? Just email me at HalfBloodPrincess101@yahoo.com.

Author's Response: thanks *blushes*.. i know i had a couple, ok a lot of spelling and grammar errors.. my version of word suck. thanks for noticing them =P

I've allready posted the other story, and i'm just waiting for it to get accepted.
I've would have love if you made me a banner! =P
~Kaley

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*blink*
AHHHHHH!!! That was awesome. Sirius needs a hug. Also, I don't think he'd ever be able to figure it out, considering who he is... Um... RUN!

Author's Response: thank you. I'm not sure either if he'll ever figure it out, but a girl can hope..
~Kaley

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ooh! i like it! you even have sirius' teddy in the banner. lol

Author's Response: lol . yeah. Lucky_Potion made it for me, I really loved it! if you are happy so am I!
~Kaley

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I really liked that story! I'll make you a banner if you want.

Author's Response: Thanks! that would be great! I'm glad u liked it! me e-mail adress: anthonsen93@hotmail.com

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I love the story I can just see Sirius with his teddy bear!:)
~Nazo

Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
yeah, I picture him too when I wrote it..=P
~Kaley

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hey!! It finally got accepted!! I have waited forever!!
I'm glad for you *smile*
Can't wait til you finish first chappie of Angel... then u can start on chap 2... :P
Well, don't say I didn't review!! Heh! Go Lulu!!
-Mumu aka your partner in crime;)

Author's Response: I'm glad you're glad =P
I'm working on Angel ever so often, but I just can't get it right.. I won't say you didn't review, not anymore...
~Lulu your partner in crime...=P

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That was really good and very funny, love the story lol
dreamseeker

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words.
I desperately needed them..!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Kaley

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