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Review #1, by WhiteRoseBlackSky Fred's Theme

13th December 2005:
that's so good! it's so funny! i actually heard the song in my head as i read it. but... in the line 'Oh, Gonna try with a little help from my brother Beater', i don't think u need both 'brother' and 'beater'. the song would still make sense and flow better if either brother or beater was removed. but other than that, really enjoyable!

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Review #2, by erin williams Fred's Theme

3rd March 2004:
hahahahaha!! love it!!!

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