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Review #1, by Lady Serendipity Arrival

9th July 2006:
"Ah, it's okay Remus! Come along, every is dying to see you! We have loads to catch up on!" Harry announced, quickening his pace. I think you meant, everyone! xD Nice story. It could've been longer I dont really sense the storyline yet. Please continue with the story though! Nice xD

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Review #2, by lairyfights123 Arrival

3rd July 2006:
Ahhhhh! You finally got it validated!!!!!!! YAY!!!!! Doesn't it make you happy to get a review!?!? Yes, like I said before it was very short, but maybe it was a a prologue of sorts, you know?


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Review #3, by Fan4life05 Arrival

28th June 2006:
Interesting start! I like the plot. Hopefully the next chapterts will be longer. You did a good job with explaining Remus' feelings. I'd very much like to see how this one goes, so I will add you to my favorites. Keep it up.

Author's Response: My very first review. =P Thanks for you input. I had a friend read it and she though it was really short but it's hard to write a lot sometimes. Hopefull the next chapter will be a tad bit longer. =P

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