that was sad indeed
and good workAuthor's Response: Thank you :) Report Review
OMG!! *favorites* 10/10Author's Response: Ta Report Review
dat was so awesome!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
lovley. Very, very sad. Poor Dumbledore!
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please add moreAuthor's Response: Nope sorry! One shot! Kate Report Review
Depressing. Really really really depressing. Wondefully writen, brilliant story...but this is the most depressing, horrible thing I've every read. If that makes any sense. I'd never thought that Dumbledore would ever loose his 'obsession with love' and it's really sad to see him do this. That was also realy sad what you did to poor McGonagall.
Voldemort seems slightly out of character though. I don't think he would just lie on his bunk.
Despite this...10/10 without a doubt.
ps. I was going to put in the thing with Tonks and Lupin in my fic but seeing as you have already done this I won't. Author's Response: Lol. Yeah, I thought most entries in that challenge would be Dramione etc so I wanted to do something different... It was meant to be depressing so I obviously did something right! Thanks. P.s please do use tonks/lupin thing if you want to, I don't mind Report Review
I founded sadAuthor's Response: It was meant to be! Report Review
It was good and powerful, I liked that. You should always check your grammar and spelling, though. More punctaution marks during dialogue would be good, too. You can use more description in the dialogue too, especially with this because it's so wrought with emotion. But all in all, well done! Keep writing.Author's Response: Lol, I'm a maths student... grammar doesn't come naturally! Thanks :) Report Review
omg... that was bloody brilliant! blown away...! how could u come up with so many ideas of deaths... loved it... omg im still in shock! well writen. thumbs upAuthor's Response: Guess I have a twisted mind! Thanks :) Report Review
Very interesting perspective. I enjoyed reading it.Author's Response: Thank you, I was aiming for smething a bit different. :) Report Review
awwwww, poor albus *hugs albus* I love your story i think you have writtern it really well! well done!Author's Response: Thanks! :) Report Review
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