please update soon---fab so far- really exciting read Report Review
that was great!! I loved it!! You have to finish it!!! ....a big surpise seeing as this is your first fan-fic...keep writing!!
Author's Response: It's not my first fan-fic, it's my first NOVEL length fan-fic.
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Wow. You need to write more. I hope they beat the crap outta Snape :)Author's Response: Hmmmmm..... Beat Snape up huh? Report Review
I love it! Very well written. I can't wait for more!Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Report Review
Oh, no. You CAN'T DO THIS TO ME!!!! Please update soon!
;)Author's Response: Can't do what to you? Report Review
Nice! Update soon and please make longer chapters! Author's Response: Will do. They're progressively getting longer. The next'll be better.
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I loved it~
Well 1st I loved your style in wrighting, and then I loved the way he went back and helped the Dursley's even though they had been so cruel to him. I can't wait to read more from you!Author's Response: I'm working on the second chapter. It'll be a little while until the update becasue I'm out of town until the 6th. Plus I'm not quite finished with it but yah... THanks for the reveiw. Report Review
Very gd wen are u going to write next chapter plz replyAuthor's Response: I'm working on the chapter as we speak... type. Is there some way I can alert readers when a new chapter is up? Report Review
This is good- it has a lot of potential. Now, for everyone's favorite... NITPICKING TIME!
In the second paragraph, you use "it's" aka it is, where it should be "its", which is a posessive pronoun.
In the fourth paragraph from the bottom, you capitalized aunt and it shouldn't be. It's only capitalized if it has her name after it.
In the last paragraph, it should be "Death Eaters" not "Death Eater's". It's plural, not possesive. A comma after the word "expect" would be good too, but that's pretty much your choice.
It seems a little improbable that he wouldn't care about Underage Wizardry, when he could just drag Dudley from the bed. Also, he doesn't know how to Apparate. He didn't manage it when taking the classses, I believe.
I think that's all- excellent, it's not that much. I look forward to reading the next chapter!Author's Response: Thansk for the reveiw. On the contrary, I think that Harry's lack of respect for the ministry would lessen his resillience towards thei alws, but I hear where you're coming from. Also Harry did mange to apparate in lessons, and when he took Dumbledore back fromt he cave. Report Review
Good Start, but you need to add more! ^.^ *Waits for chapter 2*Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the reveiw. The rest will be longer, I was just testing the waters.
Thanks again. Report Review
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