Reading Reviews for Earth Wind Water Fire
  
4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Rayb008 chapter 1

16th July 2009:
Hey this is pretty good.why don't you finish it

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Review #2, by lovette chapter 1

21st April 2008:
please continue love it

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Review #3, by CallieWood chapter 1

16th March 2008:
This story was pretty good. the things you really need to work on are the punctuation, spelling, grammar, and sentence structure. When you write the next chapter, you should consider writing it on Microsoft Word before you paste it on here. Your plot is really good and the way you portray your characters is good, it's just the Instant Message Chat basically kills the storyline.

Good Luck!

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Review #4, by Crizbin chapter 1

6th September 2007:
please write more

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